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A Pondering Moment

a Pondering Moment in the sensual hours of day...or night can horrendously ache the mind for every passing thought leaves a sense of humane torment…or delight they can ostensibly liquefy the heart a split second of silence leads us back to the days that we love so very much…or hate and oh! how they tear ourselves apart But we need them These moments… Keep us alive…or dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/2/2017 2:36:00 PM
I couldn't agree more. This lovely poem speaks to me of the lesser of two evils: live and possibly be hurt or live in fear. Thanks for sharing..............peace!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/2/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Richard, for looking back at this one! You're spot on! <3 ~Laura
Date: 10/31/2011 2:08:00 PM
Dear Laura, I truely like YOUR "or" " day... or night " torment...or delight " " Love or Hate " a " alive...or dead ' Superb Pen YOU are an amazing POETESS Keep the Magic Pen Flowing with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Humble Liege...Harry
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:19:00 PM
My thoughts written in a different way.Hhhhmmmmmm...lol
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on your win in Brian Strand's "Five To 14" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:03:00 PM
Truly a pondering moment. Leaves on wondering. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your super win with this loveliest of poetry..luv..
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:59:00 PM
Laura,..well impressed... great spirit..p.d.
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