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A Poet's Spring

I will absorb the warm sunshine today, I'll wrap myself within a golden ray. Nature's music enchants the tropic air Where windswept waves will spur me to declare The tender wishes I've been dreaming of, That younger years when we first fell in love Could cross the barriers of time's sweet past And return pain free bodies that would last. When the young speak about the golden years They do not realize the many fears That plague us as we reach that golden age. They do not understand our pent-up rage At doing simple things we used to do Can be too much and soon pain will ensue. Poetry can return us to our spring Where youth of green is seen in everything. 10-27-19

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Date: 11/5/2021 3:21:00 PM
I like how you connected youth and spring, Loved the flow, Wonderful write Connie
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:07:00 PM
I can relate to this. When I wss young there used to be not enough hours in a day. Now that I have gotten older if there were any more I would hurt myself. Lol. I like your imagination. The young have no clue.
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Date: 11/23/2019 11:59:00 AM
Had to read this one again Connie. Great poem. love phyl
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/23/2019 3:25:00 PM
I thank you Phyl. I finally got a new poem posted. It takes me time to write for contests rather than poems like this one that spring forth with no effort. xxoo
Date: 11/17/2019 6:01:00 AM
A wonderful read and a great writer. Thanks, Connie. Best of everything to you, William.
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Date: 11/16/2019 2:16:00 PM
Hi Connie, I really enjoyed you penning your "truth". Poetry is so amazing and powerful. What it can do has no bounds, because it's birthed in one's imagination. One can soar like an eagle or bathe in the fountain of youth. I enjoyed this write my friend. Have a fantastic weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/15/2019 10:31:00 AM
What a sweet poem and wish about the golden year’s dear friend Connie. We often remember those moments of sweet love and tender feelings at different phases of our life. When craze and love for this wonderful time no longer reminds us, then and then only we really start getting old, but so long, we keep them young in our memories life remains a beautiful destination. Beautiful & sweet lines well knitted df. I am writing a story series. Please visit my page at ease. Love best wishes..Ravindra
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Date: 11/14/2019 2:58:00 PM
Hello Connie Wong, you are right about the young not understanding about the Golden Years. They will when they get there and then they will realize how it is for us. Have a nice day my friend. jugs Darlene.
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Date: 11/13/2019 8:04:00 PM
Hi Connie, Love this poem that starts in one direction then takes us into a lovely, positive place. Beautiful write!
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:31:00 PM
It truly can, well penned.
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Date: 11/9/2019 12:14:00 PM
Hey Connie want those younger years for sure. Nothing to golden about these golden years. Enjoyed your poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:34:00 PM
"Dreaming of the younger years" I was 80 last year, and I told everyone.. .I was just "40 twice." I agree with John's comments. So be the age you are when you wake up, hate to say somedays 100, tomorrow hope feel like 45. Go with the flow and don't let age define who we are.
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:06:00 PM
hey connie. I need to hurry up here and do stuff in the kitchen. I hope I am caught up to all your poetry.Let me know please if you have one I never saw here yet!
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:42:00 AM
Excellent and well expressed. Thanks for sharing it,
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Date: 11/8/2019 4:56:00 AM
VERY BRILLIANT POETRY ABOUT A POET. ENDING IS SUPERB.........HUGS//MANMATH//
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Date: 11/6/2019 11:01:00 AM
It's hard to add anything else to what John said. So I just add this wonderful poem to my favs)
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/10/2019 3:31:00 PM
Beautiful and true words, Connie. We get older, but poetry remains eternally young.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/7/2019 1:48:00 PM
I really appreciate you faving this poem Kurt. Poetry indeed helps revive the aging body to enjoy that spirit of youth that never leaves us. Thank you very much my friend. xxoo
Date: 11/6/2019 7:06:00 AM
It's funny, when you get to be our age, the mind still feels like it did in our thirties but our bodies remind us every day that isn't the case. Your words are true, Connie, we remain young through our poetry. All the best my friend. Hugs, John
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/7/2019 1:50:00 PM
I agree with you John. I feel I haven't aged that much in my mind....I am wiser now, but my body reminds me of the years. Thank you for such thoughtful comment. xxoo
Date: 11/5/2019 9:03:00 PM
Hello Connie … as the years progress the memories remain, but the pain appears to be not as severe. Once again, you have written a touching poem - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/7/2019 1:53:00 PM
I thank you Lindsay! I am enjoying retirement, just not slowing down. Cheers, Connie xxoo
Date: 11/5/2019 12:05:00 PM
Writing poetry is like a tonic and a holiday for the soul - we forget all else and become absorbed in the moment - we have just moved to a new home as we decided to downsize, we were rattling in our old one in which 3 generations had lived - a very traumatic move, but my treasure was laying hidden, as yet not found - whilst unpacking a cupboard of my mothers, I discovered a bunch of poems from my Grandfather to me, one of which I posted a few days ago. Hugs and blessing dear friend, Jennifer.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/7/2019 1:54:00 PM
How wonderful and exciting. What a gift! I shall go have a look. Thank you Jennifer. xxoo
Date: 11/5/2019 11:13:00 AM
A splendid poem Connie. Hugs
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Date: 11/4/2019 5:17:00 PM
I went walking today and overdid it Connie. By evening, extra Epson salts were needed in the bath....LOL. All in moderation, eh?
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:46:00 PM
i love this....i can relate with all that is plaguing me in life... this is an amazing piece and wonderfully penned...i don't know how i missed this one but glad i saw it now... i love living in poetry...the journeys are always wonderful! XoXo
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Date: 11/2/2019 12:44:00 PM
A profound message you have expressed through your 'spring' Connie!
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Date: 11/1/2019 8:28:00 PM
I sure can relate to this one after all I went through the past decade or so, Connie. Lovely words for giving this message. HOw I wish I were smart enough to understand why I can't join a yahoo group . I will be asking my friend at school for help; otherwise, I'm in poetry purgatory!!
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Date: 10/30/2019 4:07:00 PM
Poetry is an intoxicating potion of healing, and those who 'drink' gain the benefit of make-believe, in the process putting aches and pains at the back of their minds. You describe two-faced life perfectly, Connie. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/30/2019 12:52:00 PM
Great and so true. The young can't understand until they are there and then it is too late. I grew up with many older people so a learned a little from them. Wish I had learned more.......
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