A Poet's Heart

Does a poet's heart link with gentle clouds from afar
to capture fragments of magic that stray from a star?

October 7, 2021
Couplet #3 contest
sponsored by L. Milton Hankins
Second Place Trophy!
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Kavanagh  Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 10:05 AM
This one is so creative Anne, who knows where poets inspiration comes from, sometimes it really just takes a tiny spark, to make a great couplet like this one, congratulations cheers David
Peck Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thank you, David. I like to think of poets as magicians: turning the mundane into something beautiful. It's almost magical :)
Ebbs Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Congrats, I like this :)
Peck Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thanks for your comments, Edward!
Daniel Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Brilliant thoughts, Ann:) congratulations:)
Peck Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Thanks so much, Jo!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 8:03 AM
What brilliance! Brevity is a gem itself Thank you for sharing, and Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
Peck Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Thank you, Iris. Yes, brevity is a gem. I love Chinese proverbs that say so much with so few words.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "A poet's Heart" is a lovely story/write. Have a blessed autumn day......................
Peck Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, Paula, for your very kind words.
Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:34 PM
Dear Ann, my heart’s imagination is ever enchanted by your gorgeous poem. Such exquisite imagery! Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Peck Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comments, Susan. I'm deeply touched by them.
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Stirring and lovely! Congratulations on your win, Ann. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Peck Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comments, Evelyn!
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:51 AM
a beautiful poetic question Ann:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Grasso Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Lovely, Ann! Congratulations on your win! ...Fran
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, Fran!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win! Beautiful, moving “fragments of magic that stray from a star?”,,,,,really poignant. Blessings, Paulette
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Thank you for your nice comments, Paulette.
Gauthier Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Delightful, Ann. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish ~
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, for your nice comments, Line!
Agustin Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me ask myself such poetic question... God bless you.
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Beata. Poets' magic comes from somewhere :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 12:59 AM
Lovely thoughts! Congrats on your top win!!
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Thank you so much, Krish!
Alex Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 11:46 PM
Beautiful lines with a great thought-provoking question.
Hankins Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 8:13 PM
Ann, my congratulations on your top spot in my recent contest. Your couplet is, indeed, magical. Beautiful thought! This is a coveted spot out of fifty entries. Wonderful write!
Peck Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much, Milton! I am completely overjoyed and honored!
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 8:46 AM
You captured that magic in your lovely poem, Ann. Brilliant thoughts.
Peck Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 2:45 PM
Thanks so much for your nice comments, vijay!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Heavenly! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings
Peck Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Thank you, Connie! I appreciate your comments.
Sangster - K Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Oh Ann, this is excellent! You captured so much and in only two lines. Cheers and hugs my friend. A fav for me :-)
Peck Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Your comments really lift me,"Anne Sangster Who Writes Beautiful Thoughts" :)Take good care and hugs to you.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:05 AM
this is so lovely. I hope it wins!
Peck Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Oh, Andrea, you are so kind! Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:14 AM
I believe that the answer to the question you posed is 'Yes' -- which begs the question: Are (we) poets aware of it?! Smiles, Gershon
Peck Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:14 AM
Now we're getting deep :) Maybe it's best left unanswered. I love your wise responses!
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