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A Poets Day

A Poet sits in a chair..

      Not sleeping, lost in a stare..

                         Wonders where next line will come..

                                               A task not easy or filled with fun..

Dribble drable will the readers take..
       
            Or perhaps label this poet a fake..

                         Maybe a line may take off and scream..

                                           Or just a mans way to blow off steam..

No more to write, the cap is on the pen..

              Now just copy and paste and submit to send..

                                   A comment or two may just make my day..

                                                                For all at Soup enjoy my say..

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2011

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Isa Mahrie Date: 1/23/2011 3:52:00 AM Very nice ....love it :) Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/9/2011 5:37:00 PM A good ensemble of words that give a vivid description of how you feel at the moment. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 1/8/2011 4:05:00 PM Mostly apt Michael. writing is always a lonely occupation in many ways ;p Login to Reply

Deirdre Omaidin Date: 1/8/2011 12:27:00 PM Love the wit and the humhour in this one, you have said it all for us all. Thanks for noting my Spring poem Regards, Déirdre Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 1/8/2011 6:59:00 AM Well worded write dear poet ! Oh how true some of those days(daze) are Micheal ! Great write Sir! much love, james Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/7/2011 12:32:00 PM Hey you, hope this comment will make you day ;) Your words resonate in one way or another Mr. F :) love Wilma Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 1/7/2011 11:15:00 AM and another comment for good measure Michael,got your name right this time! Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 1/7/2011 11:11:00 AM a good honest description of the poetic struggle, Michal. Login to Reply

Jan Harvey Date: 1/7/2011 8:43:00 AM A creative mind at work! Rhyme can easily achieve at times, easier than not. Enjoy for sure. Thanks Jan. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/6/2011 4:17:00 PM Stopping by and saying 'hi' to my White Knight ... hoping your week is great my friend and looking forward to weekend football playoffs...with luv.. Jersey Girl in football mode..luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/5/2011 3:03:00 PM We've all had writer's block, Michael, but you always come up with something great. No "dribble drabble" at all! Have a wonderful evening, my friend. Love, carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/5/2011 1:09:00 PM SOUP MAIL.. W.K. from J.G. luv.. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 1/5/2011 7:54:00 AM Oh so many times I sit in that chair, lost in a stare, wondering about never mind a line, but even a word, as a matter of fact, I am doing that right now " I loved, A Poets Day" you captured what many of us do, every single day, that is the nature of the writer~~ Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 1/5/2011 6:24:00 AM What a brilliant sketch of any Poet's thoughts with both positive and negative apprehensions, which comes to every poets’ mind, while writing then copying and pasting the Poem on PS. Beautiful write my friend and many thank for appreciating my poem on Dark Clouds. Love and best wishes with all the good wishes for a Happy and Prosperous New Year......Ravindra....Michael J. Falotico Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/4/2011 8:09:00 PM yes, the comments is what makes all our days, Michael. As Barbara said here, you said a mouthful! And we enjoy new blood here like yours! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 1/4/2011 5:40:00 PM I think you said a "mouthful"..every one of us can relate to. And by the way..we do injoy your " say" very much..BG Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/4/2011 4:17:00 PM Stupendous write Michael my White Knight and a virtual quality each of us relate to ... knowing those moments of blankness and emptiness ... u pulled this one together very nicely luv and a dream to all poets are your wonderful words.... enjoyed with luv.. your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv.. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/4/2011 1:46:00 PM Sometimes it flow. Sometimes it don't. But if one line "takes off and screams" it's worth it. Good write, Mike. Dave Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/4/2011 12:48:00 PM Smile ~ "Excellent Presentation Amid A Depthful Thought" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear Friend, Amid The Muses Moment of Something Precious Such As, 'Beautiful Love;' Happy New Year;" Bye!:) ~ Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/4/2011 12:43:00 PM Smile ~ "Yes," I suppose that things could somehow present themselves amid such a light perhaps in regards unto the opening of this muses moment "My 'Dear Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!'" ~ And "Yes" again, a kind com can offer a bit of Light I do believe upon hopefully anothers "Precious Life & Heart" so, keep brushing and continue blessing my dear friend ~ ....Cont:) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/4/2011 12:42:00 PM OOO! Drbble drable... readers take... humm! poets fake.. Interesting Michael, I love and enjoy how swiftly this came to mind.. And as far as reading what you have to say will never bore me.. Have a nice one,, p.d. Login to Reply

Chuck Keys Date: 1/4/2011 12:18:00 PM "For all at Soup enjoy my say..." and you know how much we all enjoy your work. Inside our heads, we all go through many of the same painful trials and tribulations. I believe you captured it, succintly. Well done. Thank you and have a great 2011. chuck Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 1/4/2011 12:18:00 PM Hi Michael. Thanks for your comment. I am not sure if I am anti war or just a coward. Never had the chance to find out and never want to. You got the highs and lows of the writer just right here. Dribble is me. i just write and write. Then read it back and try to salvage something. I'm afraid that the delete button is my best friend. Great work. Eamon Login to Reply