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Poem written JUNE 10, 2024       11.20PM

Your sweet and romantic poem has a strong impact on me, I’m dreaming of you now, day and night you’re my fantasy; Your first love poem was amazing to show me who you are, It’s a glimpse of you, I know you’ve a shining big poet’s star. Your words are sublime like the best Lindor Chocolate I have, Where everyone enjoys and embraces with so much love; Even if I’ll swim the vast ocean or fly high over the clouds, To descend upon you and recite this poem for you, so loud. I tell this world who knows this is an infatuation and crush To a poet like you, may not send me audience’s hate or bash, I’ll cherish this feeling, nurture as we both grow from a cove To a dome of poetry, our cozy home, gift from up above. Both enjoying passionately writing free verses and rhymes, I feel we’re together, side by side sitting, walking at a time; Journeying wide road of poetry with lots of amazing types, Hand-in-hand in each tree we’ll bear fruits soon, plenty and ripe. Across the road of poetry is our goal, our dream, right? You’re my inspiration, you’re my poet’s crush, so bright! I’ll paint the lovely portrait of you and write your songs; Draw your heart passionately where soon mine belongs. I’ll now paint the flowers blooming under the sunshine, Wafting their scents, I wish I can send them all online; But only a bouquet of words, I hope it’ll be just fine, My poet, I’m your admirer for you’re one of a kind.

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Date: 3/12/2025 1:11:00 AM
A Poet's Crush Collaboration Preferred Contest Judged: 10/1/2024 2:31:00 PM Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A Place 1 ( 1 single w, 2nd-12th multi w & HM)
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Date: 10/9/2024 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your poetic skills with us. Sara K
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/9/2024 9:44:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sara. You're much welcome and thank you as well, too. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 10/9/2024 12:28:00 PM
happy belated birthday
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2024 12:33:00 AM
Thank you dearest poet sis. Likewise. Hope you did have a marvelous special day with lots of fun. Sending hugs.
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Date: 10/9/2024 12:32:00 PM
SUPER WOW, you don't know how shocked I've been, to find out this win was from my special poetic sister. I love everything about your poem. Refreshing. I can't wait to tell my hubby. This is exciting
Date: 10/9/2024 12:26:00 PM
OMG, i'm coming back to this win. WOW !!! It was yours. I don't recognize the new name. WOW. You see how much I love your poetry. I did not even know it was from my good friend. Leonora. <3
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2024 12:36:00 AM
I was surprised when I saw it and I thought you knew it dearest poet friend and sis. I triend in your contest also for the purpose of encouraging a new poet whom I/we discovered with talent at young age. But maybe next time, my request will be granted. :)))
Date: 10/8/2024 11:14:00 AM
Dearest Len, what a sweet and heartfelt poem. Congratulations on your trophy win sweet friend. So happy for you. Sending you sweet blessings "like the best Lindor chocolate."
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2024 12:40:00 AM
Hello my dearest poet friend Sam! So sorry, I've almost missed to reply on your comment. But, don't worry I'll always come back, dear. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings, but the contest isn't primier. Anyway big thanks dear and thanks a lot for the blessings too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/6/2024 7:30:00 PM
Fantastic poem. Congratulations on winning.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/8/2024 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Dr. Padma. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/4/2024 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations Len on your worthy win :) Well done on such a great poem!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Martin! I think you're one of the winners too. Warmest congratulations as well. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/2/2024 6:29:00 AM
Quite lovely my dear friend. Congratulations! :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting word and congratulatory greetings my dearest poet friend.God bless you and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/1/2024 2:56:00 PM
Hi Len, I love everything about your poem, I was captivated from start to finish. Super sweet, to have a crush and write about the cuteness. Congratulations, thank you for entering my contest. Always PD ~LINDA~
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:28:00 AM
By the way, advance Happy Birthday and all my warmest wishes! Sending lots of love and hugs. God bless you always, your family, loved ones and all your writings.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:22:00 AM
Hello my dearest poet friend and sis! Oh, I don't know what to say but I thank you so much. I wasn't expecting win since my very young collaborator didn't give extra time for this due to schoolwork. I just wanted to encourage coz I was amazed of the unexpected post (poet's 1st poem at PS). Just thought, an encouragement to write more. But, I'm glad for your approval on this piece . So much grateful and appreciated. Hugs Hugs
Date: 7/26/2024 10:32:00 PM
Coming back here. The young poet didn't really collaborate but I was really inspired to wirte this because of the first posted romantic poem was impressive.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:34:00 AM
A Poet's Crush Collaboration Preferred Contest Judged: 10/1/2024 2:31:00 PM Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A Place 1

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