Get Your Premium Membership

A Poet's Coal Glinting Eyes

I think I have a mild cold! Big deal~ complaining daily, a habit of the old. But I suffer from much gratitude.and if I dare write a poem about true reality, it's labeled as bad as having a strong, negative attitude? Some here, never read the Bard, not even of his              Romeo and his beloved, Juliet? Wherein, Shakespeare actually spoke of death. He did not write in iflowery platitudes! Some hide in poems, pretty, and run like deer from anything that touches the soul. Each night, their empty, soulless, eyes are black and empty as a piece of coal. Life is not a laughing carousel, on which we are      condemned to pen with smiles till Hell. A poet can write whatever, they choose, I say, and not be condemned to a positive-oriented, doomed, quilled-padded cell! Be you, always!                            5/17/2021                                ~1~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/18/2021 8:13:00 PM
Still and all, a steady diet of negativity consumes the poet as well as the reader. There is a time for this; there is a time for that, as Solomon wrote... :) gw
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2021 8:43:00 PM
You think? I am not sure. I don't watch news out to destroy the USA, EVER. That helps.but am aware of the hooliganism being wrought on us and not afraid to pen about it, tbe poem clearly states that. I don't write all negative nor all positive poems. You can peruse all my poems..love is my fav topic..Familial or otherwise. I am direct in my poems also. I stay away from cliches. Just do my best)) Pangie xx
Date: 5/18/2021 12:53:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes a poet can create a poem however she or he pleases. I do agree. It is the poet that chooses what to create then post the poem. Hugs Darlene xx
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2021 10:56:00 AM
Hello panagiota, yes it is the painting . Hugs Darlene xx
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2021 1:52:00 PM
Yes, it's like a painting. Do as you wish.... Thank you, my friend, Pangie xxoo
Date: 5/18/2021 4:30:00 AM
Each to their own, in poetry there is a space for everyone. Tom
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/18/2021 11:05:00 AM
Ok, Pangie xx

Book: Reflection on the Important Things