Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Tanka

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sun deep down to sea
moon behind heavy dark clouds.... 
stars astray unseen


snowstorm prediction
reaching home before snowing
dream warm recesses
keep light driving darkness
unlock door refreshing air

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Contest: Love Talks sponsored by deborah Guzzi

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 5:56 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels March 14, 2011 at 5:13 AM Congratulations Dr. Ram on your 9th place win in Debbie's contest ;)

Tahera Mannan March 13, 2011 at 9:20 PM The last line is great, and an overall effect of the whole write. Warm Congrats.

Robert Pettit March 13, 2011 at 6:02 PM Congratulations on winning in Deb's contest. Doctor, this is a fine pairing of haku and tanka. A good read.

John Freeman March 13, 2011 at 1:04 PM Congratulations Dr Ram, it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in ninth place win, Agaape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick March 13, 2011 at 12:36 PM Lovely Dr Ram..Congrats to you. BG

Kash Poet March 12, 2011 at 8:22 PM Congrats Dr Mehta on your win in the contest--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2011 at 7:31 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your super win in Love Talks contest with this awesome dialogue between two lovers..luv.. enjoy another wonderful win in top ten ..my friend..

Carolyn Devonshire March 12, 2011 at 4:15 PM Nice work, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson March 12, 2011 at 4:05 PM Congratulations Dr. Ram. Very nice. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2011 at 3:54 PM Dr. Ram, so nice to see you on the list. I especially liked the haiku part of this one. all those heavenly images! Congatulations.

Joe Maverick March 9, 2011 at 10:51 AM the reader is drawn into the poem, love the fluid dynamics here Dr Ram.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2011 at 6:47 AM Elegant and dramatic lines in this two piece poem Dr. Ram... luv your title.. my friend.. your Haiku is superb with complimenting Tanka.. luv..

Jan Harvey March 8, 2011 at 8:23 AM "moon under heavy clouds.. comes across! I can identify with the night and mystery. Thx. Jan

March 8, 2011 at 4:59 AM Great write, very nice.

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2011 at 10:58 PM Hey, this is pretty cool, Dr. Ram, a very nicely done entry here!! Good luck. I like it a lot!