A Poem For Michael

Myself I’ve never been much of a mathematician.
Algebra and stuff didn’t add up to much when I made the decision,
to respond to you, our multi-versed mathematical magician.
Because even I know all things aren’t always equal.

I don’t know what it’s like to grow up black and poor
and to wonder why other kids have more.
Or why no one looks sideways when white kids walk into a store.

It seems this world for you uses a subtraction and division equation.
Giving people who look like me a multiplication table.
We rise to the top like cream even when you’re more capable.
Those who say “Things have changed” are living in a fable.
Maybe they think it’s fine because they have lots on their table.

You have no reason to apologize, I see the sad in your eyes.
That happens when others try to bring you down to size.
But, I sense a power beyond the treatment they rationalize.
There is scripture flowing from your pen,
telling us what your people have dealt with over and over again.
You help me conceptualize that pain,
which enables me to see and realize,
why some might try to bury their blues with drugs and booze.
They think “Nothing is going to change”
They say “F it I’ve got nothing to loose!”
But you you’re a word warrior  that’s not the path you choose.
Rewrite it, rethink it, turn it into good news.

Sorrows on a graph, death and molestations.
All these sadness quotients are not merely estimations.
They defy gravity and my limited calculations.
But I can’t read your sorrow without acknowledging
I see your situation.
 I hear your brave heartfelt communication.
While still I wonder how you cope with this frustration 
Maybe it’s the angels that grace your constellation.

The way you wrote it and I read it
If I were your teacher I’d give you all the credit
Besides in this case you’re the teacher
I say hallelujah brother your life is a prayer.
Keep on speaking preacher.

So I ask what can a math challenged
middle aged white dude do?
People need  compassion for what they’ve been through
A thought can grow exponentially beyond me and you,
until it becomes true.
Action Maximization by the many for the few.

Poem by Richard Lamoureux 
Dedicated to Michael Ellis.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Darnell Sr Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 10:29 PM
Hi, Richard! Great tribute, empath poetry, you've penned. You're a great poet too. Best Wishes, William
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Thanks William.
Debole Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Very respectful and creative tribute. Don't understand why people hold other people's physical characteristics against them. We should all honor diversity. Without diversity, this world would be super boring.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:25 PM
So true Gail. Thanks for reading and Commenting. ;0)
Lawrence Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Richard, Thank you for illuminated us to Michael Ellis. I look forward to reading his words. What a heartfelt, deep and poignant tribute. I love you speaking up and giving voice, praise and realization to the plights of black people. It is long overdue. I have been reading Caste which sheds light on the many atrocities bestowed on the underprivileged. Sending all good wishes to you and yours, Susan :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:24 PM
Sorry for the late reply. The book you are reading sounds interesting. Thanks as well for the great comment.
Kaufman Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Dear Richard, This is such a timely and well written piece. I have never understood racial discrimination personally. Some of my friends of color have shared their horrific experiences and if they weren't spiritually balanced people they too would become haters. I'm just getting around to reading some of your very thought provoking pieces. Thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Thanks so much for taking time to read and comment. You made my day.
Fleming Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Fascinating poem! Title drew me in initially...glad it did so. I am going to read some of Michael's poetry as soon as I have finished here, Richard. My very best regards -- as always! :) john
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Thanks so much John. Blessings Rick.
Devnath  Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Exceptional poem read from you my dear friend. You have beautifully expressed how mathematics can be used in different kinds of emotions and passions. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:30 PM
Thanks BL. Much appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Creative lines that you have penned in this one. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 9:16 AM
My pleasure Sara.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Profound poem, Richard!! Such depth of thought and simplicity of expression. Empath poetry in real-time motion, my dear friend. Love and more love always.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Sorry to hear you are afflicted with Covid but happy to hear you are recovering. Thanks for the visit. Blessings Rick.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Been recovering from Covid-19. Feeling better each passing day. Love and peace, brother.
Puddifoot Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 2:18 PM
really like this well written, heartfelt poem..you've a talent for writing empathetic poetry :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:11 AM
What a nice thing to say Charlotte, I hope all is well with you.
Proxenos Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Racism is like a cancer Rick, it is infectious also. I abhor it. I don't understand how people see color, I see a person and respect them for what they are - you have always maintained such a wise respect and attitude to racism, such a shame that others don't try harder to negate this awful disrespect globally. Great poetry and so emotive and kind. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Thanks Jennifer, hugs and blessings to you as well.
Mchattie Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 6:41 PM
A very thoughtful piece. We all have work to do. We all hope for a better world. Have a great day my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Thanks for giving it a second read David.
Rose  Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 4:46 AM
You have an empaths great soul dear Richard, every word brings me to the realization, that we never did enough to stop the racism in this world. and probably never will. Your words hit home thankyou for sharing your skillful pen and your gentle heart, Have a great day. Make it count :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:21 AM
I will. Thanks for your visit and kind words. Hugs Rick. ;0)
Mchattie Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:07 PM
There are people who have been left behind. The good news is we can do something about it in both our private and business lives. Have a great day my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 9:18 PM
Thanks David, well said.
Pettit Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Looks like you poured some serious writing effort into this submission! This was well worth the read. Kudos to you!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Hi Robert, it’s not a contest entry. Thanks for dropping by.
Poet Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Sadly, in a society where bias still exists, climbing the social ladder is incredibly difficult for others who are significantly more talented. When they abuse drugs or commit offenses, they clearly feel socially excluded, and they are labeled, and it takes a great deal of moral strength to escape this predicament. That is where those who have a lot will contribute. awe-inspiring prose, my friend Warmest regards and best wishes, I missed your comments on my writes. Have a great day.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Lasaad. If you watch the documentary 13th it puts a lot of things in context. Many people of all races use drugs, but black people were systematically charged with drug offences and their communities have been dismantled. Prisons for profit and removal of voting rights have also been a huge part of systemic racism. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 6:37 AM
I am glad to have read both your poem, Richard, and Michael's ... a wake-up call to those who see only one side of the coin and ignore the other. Time for many to focus on their perspective. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Thanks for your visit Paul. ;0)
Proxenos Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 3:37 AM
Hi Richard, wonderful tribute for Michael, I take my hat off to those that try to change the lives of the ones with less - unfortunately in a world where racism still exists it is so hard for the those that are so capable, probably more than me to climb the ladder of success. If they take drugs or drink too much or commit petty crimes, they obviously feel alienated from society and once this has happened and the are convicted, try as they might, they are labelled, and it takes a mighty great will power to surface out of this dilemma this is where the ones who have enough, should play their part. wonderful write my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Look up the 13th Amendment documentary. It provides a very interesting perspective that helps understand the root problems that disadvantage black American communities. Thanks for adding your thoughts. ;0)
Jayasankar Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 10:23 AM
You are so intelligent to craft such a meaningful poem, so moving...Richard.. and a great tribute to fellow poet Michael Ellis. I will surely read Michael's poem. I couldn't log in to Soup much due to some personal commitments. God bless.. ~ Ani
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 5:58 PM
Hi Anitha, it is always a pleasure to have you visit.
Buehler Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Your moving tribute to Michael is a wonderful one. More people caring as you do will cause the world to change. Happy Easter, my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Thanks so much Evelyn. I appreciate your visit.
Ibeh Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 6:54 AM
What a wonderful tribute poem, Richard! I really enjoyed reading it. I'll go check out Michael's poem. Thanks!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 7:22 AM
That’s great Edward. His poem is very powerful. Thanks for dropping by.
Manassian Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 8:49 PM
So well written. It's an unfortunate reality. White privilege is real... so should be white empathy.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 11:05 PM
Agreed, hugs Rick.
Theraven Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Richard, A wonderful tribute to a gifted poet. 'don’t know what it’s like ~~ to grow up black and poor ~~ why no one looks sideways when white kids walk into a store'. Nor perhaps that of a teacher who gets a small glimpse of joy when a student finally gets the lesson. We're all schooled in the moment now. All the comments including Michael's own have left a lasting impression on me from both poems. To both who write, and lived very different lives; well done. -Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 7:56 PM
Thanks my friend. This response warms my heart. Blessings Rick.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:34 AM
WOW! Richard, salute to you. I have read one of Michael's poems, but I didn't read this one. I will, the first poem after yours. I can speak from a different perspective too - I have some good and bad experiences in life, but nothing compared to what some human beings go through. A very very powerful poem. It has to be in my faves. Thanks, Richard, for sharing.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Thanks Malabika, you are a very nice lady. It is good to make your acquaintance. Blessings Rick.
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:11 AM
- A wonderful poem for Michael Ellis, Richard - I so agree with what you write ... and I wish everyone else was too ... but, unfortunately the world is cruel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:10 AM
I have hope for the world. Perhaps a band of international poets can be the salt the world needs. Thanks and a big hug back to you.
Horsman Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 8:53 PM
So much here to ponder on Richard, The tribute says far more than just poetry, more like a recipe for a mindset. I will go and read Michael's poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 9:51 PM
Thanks Harry, a great comment from a man I’ve come to greatly respect over the years I have been hanging out here. ;0)
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