A Poem About Growing Up

Writhing, languid, and melancholy,
I exorcise the child from my bones.
Prevailing are personal philosophies,
Though I can no longer be who I once was. 
I remain rooted in my memories,
Juvenility of mine stays with people and places left behind.
While maturity swells within me, 
I sometimes wish to retreat to a time when
My only worry was swinging so high that I’d never come back.
It dawns on me that innocence is the truest state of being,
When evil holds existence only in fables and fairy tales.
When child leaves my body, 
I am no longer girl, but gladiator,
not just woman, now warrior.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 10:18 AM
So true..who does not miss the innocence of childhood. You expressed it so well. Congrats!! :))
Gupta Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Beautiful thought in meaningful words ... Great ....
Smith Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Never lose the innocence...congrats Sarah
George   Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 1:57 PM
Very deep and profound dear, Sarah. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:52 AM
I love those last two lines especially! This is wonderful poetry, Sarah! Well done!
Turner Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations Sarah for being on the short list of Best of's. It all seems so long ago. Facing the reality, there are no do overs. Really a wonderful poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:21 AM
I feel your power, congrats on a fine win.
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Line 10--Wow!--greatest line among all the other great lines. Yes, those were to days! Congrats on your win, Sarah. Janice
Scars Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Sarah, I LOVE the last 3 lines! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Lawless Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM
The last couplet....the stance of a Mother protecting her young. Thanks for dropping it in the contest
Scars Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 7:55 AM
lovely sweet Sara, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Way to go Sarah! Congrats.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Sarah, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
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