A Poem About Growing Up

Writhing, languid, and melancholy,
I exorcise the child from my bones.
Prevailing are personal philosophies,
Though I can no longer be who I once was. 
I remain rooted in my memories,
Juvenility of mine stays with people and places left behind.
While maturity swells within me, 
I sometimes wish to retreat to a time when
My only worry was swinging so high that I’d never come back.
It dawns on me that innocence is the truest state of being,
When evil holds existence only in fables and fairy tales.
When child leaves my body, 
I am no longer girl, but gladiator,
not just woman, now warrior.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/17/2017 10:18:00 AM
So true..who does not miss the innocence of childhood. You expressed it so well. Congrats!! :))
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:26:00 PM
Beautiful thought in meaningful words ... Great ....
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Date: 10/26/2016 2:17:00 PM
Never lose the innocence...congrats Sarah
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:57:00 PM
Very deep and profound dear, Sarah. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 10/20/2016 9:52:00 AM
I love those last two lines especially! This is wonderful poetry, Sarah! Well done!
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations Sarah for being on the short list of Best of's. It all seems so long ago. Facing the reality, there are no do overs. Really a wonderful poem.
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:21:00 AM
I feel your power, congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:00:00 AM
Line 10--Wow!--greatest line among all the other great lines. Yes, those were to days! Congrats on your win, Sarah. Janice
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Date: 10/5/2016 7:35:00 AM
Sarah, I LOVE the last 3 lines! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:36:00 PM
The last couplet....the stance of a Mother protecting her young. Thanks for dropping it in the contest
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:55:00 AM
lovely sweet Sara, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:50:00 PM
Way to go Sarah! Congrats.
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:35:00 PM
Sarah, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
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