A Poem

I don’t know that a poem
needs  to say much...stoking
flames of feelings would be 
closer to poetic truth – Yes, poetry 
needs Truth! Even a lie, to be 
taken seriously must be truthfully
spoken.  A good liar, in the moment
believes his or her own claims.  Wears 
a robe of authority -- projects with
the clarity of bible verses unassailable. 

So, where does that leave
a guy like me? 

One who questions the rise and 
fall of most everything – dissatisfied with the
majority of appealing explanations?  When it comes
to the troubles of the world, reasons that
no Good God, in control, would have allowed
opportunity for such a moral mess -- 

What do I write about?  What
should my poetry address?  
Maybe God is neither good
nor bad?  Not a novel thought! 
Were it true, just sad….
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 4:30 PM
I appreciate the sincerity in your words. I, too, sometimes wonder why a loving God would 'allow' such things. I don't know the bigger picture so I'm baffled at times.
DiMino Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 6:17 PM
Free Will. It means that we not only can make choices, but we also control alternative variables unlimited. Though we have individualized souls we are part of universal consciousness. What affects one affects all. We create our own physical and mental reality. Time we stop abusing God's miracle gift to humanity.
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 11:31 AM
What a most philosophical and heartfelt poem this is dear Jo. Somedays I question too, and sometimes I feel like every lie too has some truth there, and somehow reveals ones inner voice! I am honestly so grateful to read poets like you, sincere and authentic As nowadays its rare to find a real voice! Your poetry and your comments show me that you are a deep feeler and thinker Pleasure reading you today Sending you light always 💫
DiMino Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Thank you so much, Empress. Made my day!
George Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 8:56 PM
Even if it is a lie we say, it should be truthfully said--- Love the satire in this. Yes, we are sometimes totally confused and think about the verity of God's love and goodness. But despite such infiltrating doubts, I love to cling to the notion of God's goodness. A Great poem.
DiMino Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 9:58 PM
All I can go by, with some degree of certainty is, He has always been good to me. Loving, and ultra patient. I have seen enough miracles in my life, and in the lives of others to definitely believe in God's existence. That reconcile is unshakable. Thank you, Valsa.
Godwin Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:30 PM
IT LEAVES YOU AUTHENTIC JUST AS GOD WISHES ALL OF HIS CHILDREN TO BE. I have cried and raged about AI because it will further diminish our authenticity and cannot understand why everyone isn't concerned. Pls read AI Does Not Write Poetry (my 1st pg) And please read a message I'm going to compose after finishing in this box. I am very confused and need your assistance. I love the tone, attitude, the answer search, but NEVER DOUBT the influence you have on people. CayCay
DiMino Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 3:52 AM
Just a thought came to me: perhaps a page where each writer with concerns adds a paragraph or two, could be interesting and informative. At least would open a needed dialogue maybe? My paragraph below to start.
DiMino Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 7:56 PM
Hi CayCay, I am with you. Why anyone would use ai to create poetry is beyond me. Like emails instead of a phone calls. It takes us further from what it means to be human -- live relationships that ultimately connect us spiritually, soulfully. Poetry is Truth. Best definition I can give it. Truth really should be the hub of all our thoughts and actions. Ai further distances writing humanity from the core nature of poetry~ Truth. Catchy rhymes, music, its all good stuff -- but not necessarily good poetry. Truth is what has always set poetry apart from all other forms of writing communication. It's like the difference between being present and truly alive. My off the cuff feelings on the subject anyway, for the little they may be worth. You fight the good fight. Thank you, CayCay. If I have said anything here you would like to repeat post, please do. When it comes to creative writing I am very much against ai. My feelings, the use of ai in poetry is sacrilegious! Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 4:58 AM
- A poem with many thoughts, Joe :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Anne; and that's all they are, thoughts -- a poem to open novel conversation with others. Have a beautiful writing day my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:36 PM
I think you understand a lot about God , Joe. God is very very good. I have been reading and watching videos on near death experiences. John Burke has analyzed hundreds of them and written the book Imagine Heaven. Everyone always says our time here is a blink of an eye in eternity . Things are going to get really good when we pass over. I live for that day now. Believe me. I didn't even use to be a strong believer until I gained inspiration from all the things I have been learning.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 12:09 AM
Thanks for your comment. God certainly doesn't enjoy our grief. But He knew it would happen through our free will so it's part of the larger picture. I am up in the air about reincarnation and I have heard of this book. In some ways it seems in conflict with the near death of a very genuine atheist who first went to hell and then was saved by calling on Jesus . He came back to life and became a pastor for the past 30 years. Howard Storm. He is on YouTube and wrote a book. I am currently reading Imagine Heaven , which I highly recommend but I want to read the book you suggested as well
Maverick Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:41 PM
Dear Andrea..Well put from the heart and from it being open to God, i take comfort that i ( oh its impossible not to use that term somewhere!) I i i..There! Maybe i've used it up.? Where was me.?' Yet taking comfort in the fact of pointing you to some accounts of nde's a few years ago now.? So we come to the case of ' Joe Dimino ' be-low lol))) don'cha love this brother.? I know you do Andrea; me to.!!! 🙏🙌..Life is full of trial and error, Oh me, oh my..I will not give up with him God willing, He's got lots of great attributes..And i'll bet a soft mattress lol))) I just chucked that in ( anyhow blessings to you both !) As we travel this rocky road.'
DiMino Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 3:56 PM
Yes, I do love God, and believe God is good and loving. Yes, God treasures you and will take precious care of you. People need to look more deeply into Free Will...Free Will is All Powerful. Just my opinion, folks should never accept heartache or tragedy as God's will. God never wants pain and suffering. He doesn't destroy even evil cities. We have control over all of this mess. The world is a reflection of man's present state of consciousness. I believe very much in reincarnation. I recommend reading "Life After Death" by Hannah Jacob Doumette, a great Christian Mystic. This is the most authoritative and advanced information ever given on the process of leaving the body and the experiences the individual will encounter after life on Earth.
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