A Pleasant Trip

I stepped out the door to feed Doggy
The day was so beautifully foggy
I tripped on his dishes
And swam like the fishes
And now all my dress clothes are soggy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:25 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day,Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 11, 2013 at 6:46 AM
Isaiah, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
Toran Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 7:42 AM
An outstanding limerick. Great rhyme, smooth in rhythm and flow. Congrats on your featured writing!...Milt
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 2:40 PM
yep, you've got the beat AND the wit!
Poet Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 5:10 AM
Hahaha...enjoyed this very much Isaiah.Congrats on your win.
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November 15, 2012 at 2:11 PM
A cute limerick, Isaiah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Isaiah. Love, Carol
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November 15, 2012 at 2:21 AM
congrats isaiah on another terrific write and win luv..
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November 14, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Isaiah, congratulations in Susan's "Another fun poem" contest... have a nice day... :-) Linda...
Ober Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Nicely written! Love the humour here. Congrats!
Brown Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my poetry Isaiah. It truly was appreciated. I enoyed reading your poem this morning. Love, Carol
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October 27, 2012 at 9:18 PM
What a pleasant trip, and limerick... enjoyed...pd
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Well written - like it .. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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