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A Place of Zen

find your favorite spot; a place of zen. make yourself comfortable s e p e r a t e your mind from life's challenges, from negative stress, from intrusive thoughts. suspend all your woes. breathe out toxic feelings. fully surrender to tranquility. be in harmony with nature, be still in mind and body. scan the world around you, then gently close your eyes. as your thoughts start to wander, imagine yourself lounging at an imaginary beach, facing a restless sea. now, sit silently and listen... to the seagulls to the ebb and flow of the tides, to the sound of your breath; deeply taking the moist sea air into your lungs and slowly exhale them. make the most of your idle time in your place of zen. (Didactic/Imagism) Writing Challenge - Z words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme of choice: Zen Date written: 05/13/2023

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Date: 6/2/2023 6:17:00 PM
Dear Edward, your persuasive poem brought me to a place of zen within the mindful beauty of your verse. Splendid imagery touches the senses and soothes mind, body and soul. I especially admired the way you separated the letters in the word “separate”, it was a lovely way to emphasize it! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2023 9:21:00 AM
Coming from someone I greatly admire, this means a lot! Thank you so much for the wonderful visit and congratulations, Susan:-)
Date: 5/16/2023 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/16/2023 4:06:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 5/15/2023 4:26:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, excellent and congratulations. !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/15/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 5/14/2023 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest...Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/15/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Alfonso!:-)
Date: 5/14/2023 3:00:00 PM
Very lovely, Edward. As I read, I could feel my shoulders relaxing. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ann:-)
Date: 5/14/2023 2:36:00 PM
what a peaceful poem I have a sense of calm reading it, many congrats on your win Edward:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan:-)
Date: 5/14/2023 1:20:00 PM
Good theme. Congratulations on your win, Edward! Carol Louise
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carol:-)
Date: 5/14/2023 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Edward! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Date: 5/14/2023 7:03:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Edward :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:03:00 PM
Thanks again, Ann-Lise:-)
Date: 5/13/2023 4:41:00 PM
Very calming influence of these Zen like words you convey: now, sit silently and listen... to the seagulls to the ebb and flow of the tides, to the sound of your breath...A sure win for you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 5/13/2023 2:37:00 PM
Hello Edward, This is exactly what i do when I do the Zen. Meditation is relaxing a person feels peaceful. Enjoy your weekend. Blessings my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/15/2023 4:25:00 AM
Hello Edward, I hope you had a very nice weekend. You are welcome my friend. blessings. /Darlene\
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/14/2023 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene:-)
Date: 5/13/2023 2:16:00 PM
- A meaningful and lovely poem, Edward - Best wishes - Have a great weekend :) -
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/13/2023 2:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

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