A Place No One Likes To Be

I know a place; no one likes to be there,
yet nearly everyone I know has gone
to sit with trepidation in a chair,
and then reclined, each person sits and drools
while helplessly they stare up at the face
of someone who is cramming too big tools
inside their mouth, which has too small a space -
too little space to have to let inside
large forceps or that vacuum that lets pass
the grime collecting in mouths open wide!
Perhaps some go just for the laughing gas!
But go we must - and sit still for the drill,
enough sometimes to make a grown man ill.

Written June 17, 2016 
for the If it hurts so bad, why do we do it? Poetry Contest of  Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/27/2016 12:52:00 AM
not what I expected but a great surprise ! Made me smile Andrea.
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Date: 6/25/2016 8:54:00 AM
Had me wondering in the beginning - great use of humor. Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Jesse
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Date: 6/23/2016 10:12:00 PM
Andrea, dear Andrea, only you could compose a Sonnet about the dreaded dentist chair. Now rinse, spit, floss, and I'll see you in six months.
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Date: 6/23/2016 12:36:00 PM
It wouldn't be so bad so long as the dentist isn't Dr. Szell. Remember Marathon Man? Love, daver
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John Lawless
Date: 6/23/2016 10:13:00 PM
...IS IT SAFE ? ?
Date: 6/23/2016 10:42:00 AM
Hi Andrea, i Loved the humour in this one but it had a great deal of truth. For some people, a trip to the dentist is pretty terrifying, even as adults. If they terrify you as children then it always sticks with you. Well, i see congratulations are in order Andrea. Congratulations on your placement. I am so afraid of dentists now that they usually have to wake me up when they are finished, those chairs, i do find them comfortable. A definite seven Andrea. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 6/21/2016 8:32:00 AM
How you make me laugh. Great write sis.
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:36:00 PM
It's an entertaining poem, Andrea, but not an entertaining place to be. I used to hate dentists; nowadays I don't mind them at all. When we're in pain we don't stop to argue about it!! [been in hospital with a gall stone a few days ago...the pain was so acute; now much better thanks to painkillers; ordeal not over yet.] // paul
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:26:00 AM
Ha! Funny write!!
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Date: 6/20/2016 6:02:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant. Well done.
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:22:00 PM
I hate going to the dentist. Well expr seed Andrea.
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Date: 6/19/2016 4:12:00 PM
This is very good, Andrea, good luck in the contest :-) Hugs
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:54:00 AM
Ah! Been there. Great of you to think of this for the contest:)
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Date: 6/18/2016 7:28:00 PM
Ooh, this is amazing!! I realised what it was about only the second time.. It's a cool idea! :-D All the best in the contest, dear Andrea; Hope this does very well!! :) :)
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Date: 6/18/2016 7:26:00 PM
I could have a down payment on a house for the cost of the dentists I have been to. Enjoyed, all can relate.
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Date: 6/18/2016 4:49:00 PM
- Something we have to do .... but, is not with joy and smiles - Great written for the contest, good luck Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:57:00 PM
I'd gone to the dentist last week. They have a new chair that gives a massage when cleaning the teeth. I'm wondering how it would react if I'd needed a filling? Love this write, but no fan of the drill. Hugs, Mikki :)
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:00:00 PM
I have dentures. lol It's been so long I can't remember. I really like the sonnet.
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Date: 6/18/2016 2:56:00 PM
I don't mind the dentist anymore I used to be terrified but when I had my son I didn't want him to be scared - got a new dentist and was happy - son has no fear at all:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2016 2:58:00 PM
well, except for that one dentist that gave me laughing gas. that was awesome, except he was expensive and now I can only afford the stupid dental college place.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2016 2:57:00 PM
I don't MIND it as much any more, but I certainly do not want to be there. hahaha
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