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A Place In the Sun

Down a river, low the breath sighs though sunshine plays in tide’s ballet a blaze aglow like morning paint with heaven’s glint, its twirling sway. Wings of dove flutter through daybreak along crests , hands fold in prayer… then in full zest, sacred beams twirl with His grace easing my despair. This blessed day chimes of mercy as ray divine enchants eyes’ soul, where I lift pure dedication praising God’s light, my spirit whole! Verlena Walker's Soulidified

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/9/2015 12:28:00 PM
A 7 for the wonderful spiritual write. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette...SKAT
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:46:00 AM
love the first 2stanzas Nette.. :) beautiful imagery and message wow.. ! congrats on the win! ..olive eloisa
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:31:00 AM
An inspiring image of joy and beauty, Nette...congrats on your excellent win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:29:00 PM
Very beautiful, Nette, and most inspiring. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:50:00 AM
Mesmerising powerful words nette, u really hv an amazing pen,, congrats on top place win my friend!
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:19:00 AM
How enchanting this poem is, Nette!. It flows in spiritual context and lovely imagery. Ohh I see it's also a high winning entry....so congrats to you too! Have a lovely day! // paul
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/2/2015 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks Nette... Verlena
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Date: 2/2/2015 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserving win... #Congrats on your well deserving win... A beautiful pen... #7. lov, nad!
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:34:00 PM
Such a beautiful flow to the poem Nette many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful, spiritual, and full of God's grace and warmth. You have outdone yourself with this one.
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Date: 1/16/2015 10:49:00 PM
Most graceful and eloquent...very nice, Nette! :) john.
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Date: 1/16/2015 8:12:00 PM
It is a shining poem of God's grace, Nette. It must be for a contest of Gail or some other one that likes religious poems for contests? It kept my interest.
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Date: 1/16/2015 12:31:00 PM
I'm souled out! Reminiscent of Amazing Grace, honorable poet!
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Date: 1/16/2015 12:26:00 PM
- A beautiful gem, I collect all your gems in my heart dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2015 10:35:00 AM
Beaming with grace is the title beautifully matched with the poem. Very deeply extracted the theme lied there in and contrasted with self dedication. Lovely done, my lovely friend, loved always,bl
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:55:00 AM
This is beautiful! You managed to make me hold my breath whilst I was reading! Agree, God is always on time!
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Date: 1/15/2015 2:52:00 AM
So many appreciate so little; this is definitely a poem of appreciation, if I've ever seen one.
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Date: 1/14/2015 6:11:00 PM
Very beautiful poem! Inspiring!
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Date: 1/14/2015 6:05:00 PM
Great poetry as always from you nette!
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Date: 1/14/2015 3:37:00 PM
I just went through a harrowing job concern and your radiant poem simply inspired me. Nettte, this is gracefully crafted ending with an amazing last stanza! Thank you.
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