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A Place In My Memory

Those lonely roads lined with touch-me-not's rain smudged walls and thatched roof tops long walked paths between the grass hearty smiling faces that pass a tiny spec at a distance far looming high in the clear blue sky a close glance at the house so dear with flowers blooming nearby The coconut trees swaying with the breeze tranquil river flowing on with ease fishermen holler and row on the sun up high its already noon the cattle rustling in the shed tired farm hands toiling for bread the smell of fresh baked rice cakes and of smoke that emanates Grannys dear face lit up bright crooning pleased at my sight hugged me close enclosed in warmth i ventured on inside The familiar room bathed in light I lay face up on the old cot ravishing the familiar feel fading into slumber longed I wake from a distant dream and ache pining for the long lost home however i may move on for within me my home lives on.
© Nadiya (25 Jan '15) * Placed 2nd in the contest 'Golden Days' by Rob Carmack on 08 April 2015.

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Date: 4/18/2015 3:18:00 PM
Poesy, Congratulations, in Rob's Golden days contest. Take Care ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/10/2015 4:34:00 PM
Poesy, congratulations on your wonderful win with this beautifully written poem, a perfect 7
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Date: 4/10/2015 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Posey. A beautifully written poem which I enjoyed reading immensely.
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Date: 4/9/2015 7:42:00 PM
What a gift memory is aye? Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/9/2015 2:41:00 AM
surely a winner that deserves a high spot, poesy...so languid.. big congrats!
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Date: 4/9/2015 12:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nad. Such an emotional and nostalgic poem about your lovely home sweet home. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win. A beautiful write!
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem and win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/8/2015 9:32:00 AM
Home is forever where the heart is! Congratulations on your winning poem !!
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Date: 4/8/2015 5:37:00 AM
I loved this journey. Congrats Poesy.
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Date: 1/27/2015 8:28:00 AM
Home sweet home Nad>love>rajat
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Date: 1/28/2015 5:40:00 AM
Ty rajat...
Date: 1/26/2015 3:28:00 PM
Beautifully passionate write!
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Date: 1/27/2015 2:05:00 AM
Thank you Kiser for reading my poems and your sweet words... appreciate it... lov, nad!
Date: 1/25/2015 5:10:00 PM
An enchanting poem on your heavenly home. What a beautiful description. It charms the readers. Happy New Year. -Mohammad
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:36:00 AM
Thank you muhammad... wish you a pleasant year ahead.
Date: 1/25/2015 12:15:00 PM
poignantly told with delightful images of reveries... truly beautiful, nadiya... thanks for your positive feedback.. huggs
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Nette.. appdeciate your comment and visit...lov
Date: 1/25/2015 8:02:00 AM
Aww. Your imagery was amazing, I could feel your world in your words. It is hard to loose moments to memories but to have them live on in your dreams is a wonderful thing. Hugs
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Date: 1/25/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Casarah... appreciate the visit.. yes ahome in our memories lives on...

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