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A Physical Delusion

You held a subtle magnetism that gradually infiltrated my perception, like the leaf of a tree in the springtime soaking up beams of my awareness. This interaction propelled affection like photosynthesis. My yearning pigmented our atmosphere a lush and vibrant hugh as the chlorophyll of my expression catapulted into the Earth and encased me in the beautiful construction of my emotions. You served as an oblivious co creater of a fragile structure composed of my own assumptions; brought forth into physicality from the abstract planes in which timelines are dreamt. It seemed to branch out from a deeply instilled seed raised up through the apex of the tangible Into a resemblance of something so magnificent it transcended the boundaries of the senses. I had become a prisoner of this structure and drifted off with it yet without the senses it felt like the utmost freedom. When you left you took with you the core foundation of this intricate ladder; growing skyward like a vine composed of every gaze, every declaration, the static of our intertwined flesh. I found, without this foundation, I could not find my way back down. Physicality now a vague memory as I float outside of gravitational forces.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/28/2024 5:49:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:26:00 AM
alyssa, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/2/2014 11:26:00 AM
Unique creativity and expressiveness in this poem about love's presence..Enjoyed reading this one today..Welcome to soup..Sara
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