Mohan Chutani Poet Rhyme

A Pet Minichu

Olive is so benign
chews on every bit she gets hold of, puts in them
big canines.

Lets tail wag firm
merrily follows us on hem
and sqirms!

Sharp ears
alert as stem
dear!!

Olive is so benign
merrily follows us on hem
dear!!

9.4.2021

Note: my example of the poem on the latest contest on 'A Pet Minichu' I initiated recently. Hope you all will be able to gather the form and express your selves about your experiences with a pet very well. Thanx in anticipation.
My pet's name is Olive.

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I Am Anaya March 9, 2022 at 12:34 PM Very interesting poem type--looks difficult to me, I will try it. Thank you for sharing your minichus.

Mystic Rose Rose February 24, 2022 at 4:31 PM Sound Divine dear Mohan, thanks for my placement, I was delighted you liked it :)

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2022 at 8:55 PM I really like this, and it does not hurt to know that my BEST dog ever had the name Ollyver!!! *thanks for my contest win

Rama Balasubramanian February 17, 2022 at 6:16 AM Thanks for my placement in your contests. For Limerick contest what is the syllables count requirements. Do you want something funny or anything will do?

M. L. Kiser February 16, 2022 at 12:13 PM Very nicely imaged. This was a fun read too.

Valsa George February 16, 2022 at 4:03 AM Very well presented ! Glad you have given this as a model. I too must try ! Thank you so much for placing my poem in the winning list !

Constance La France February 2, 2022 at 2:02 PM Mohan, a delightful write in your created form, I do not have dog but I have a cat like that, she follows me everywhere, must be close to me, clinging to me, be where I am and people think cats don't need us, oh all pets need us ~ Constance

JC Brul June 1, 2021 at 8:15 PM Such a cheerful poem. Dogs are really stress-relievers! And they don’t forget for years and years to come!

Beata Agustin May 10, 2021 at 6:42 AM Thanks for this example. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. God bless you.

Krish Radhakrishna April 15, 2021 at 11:27 AM Mohan Nice one. Shall try! Mohan Chutani April 18, 2021 at 2:06 AM Best wishes

Eve Roper April 11, 2021 at 7:42 PM Great example, Mohan, so, did try again. Eve Mohan Chutani April 18, 2021 at 2:06 AM Best wishes