Perfect Dawn

Rippled water, tranquil sky, playful ducks, Islands sea green, Horizon serene, Dawn. Bliss watching. Lass with long golden tresses. Thankful for Nature’s magnanimity. August 10,2020 For Double Tetractys Poetry Contest Picture 1 Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Jcb Brul

Date: 8/17/2020 11:39:00 PM

Oh, wow, what a superb imagery! I am mesmerized dear friend. A FAVE.. goodluck for the win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 3:36:00 AM

Thanks, JCB. So kind of you! Appreciate your kind support. Looking forward to be mesmerized by your lovely poems. Love, Mala

John Watt

Date: 8/10/2020 10:02:00 PM

Oh, how I relate to that last line 'Thankful for Nature’s magnanimity'. Lovely thoughts and nature imagery derived from the photo of the little girl feeding ducks. Lovely!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/11/2020 3:49:00 AM

Thank you, John. Wish I were in a beautiful spot as in the picture every day! I guess, my favourite topic to write about, is Nature. Best wishes, Mala

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/10/2020 9:09:00 PM

Hi Mala, this is so sweet and so tender - a "little lass" feeding the ducks - a moment snatched from time and held in your beautiful framework of words. So touching! Good luck in the contest!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/11/2020 3:51:00 AM

Hi Sam, these contests are fun to work on! The beautiful image - wish I were there! I liked experimenting on the new poetry form I never worked before! Appreciate your lovely comments. Love, Mala