A Pathway To Unfathomable Love

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Kiss me as you’d kiss a baby, softly to show your love. Touch me gently, as you would someone hurt and afraid. Hug me and hold me tightly, that I might feel secure and protected. Smile at me and laugh with me, so I can see your joy and inner peace. These are the things that sooth my soul, inviting me to join you in a loving relationship. These are the traits that will open my heart, allowing love to flow freely. Agree with me that we each have the right to be authentic, and we’ll be free to be the best we can be. Now two shall be one as passion is unshackled, we shall frolic in unfathomable love.

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Sara Baker

Date: 7/18/2025 4:43:00 PM

what a beautifully romantic poem, dearest Bill....how fortunate I am to share love and life with you. I especially like: Smile at me and laugh with me, so I can see your joy and inner peace. These are the things that sooth my soul, inviting me to join you in a loving relationship. These are the traits that will open my heart, allowing love to flow freely. Your words touch my soul....hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 7/18/2025 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, my dream come true. I love you! Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 7/18/2025 11:08:00 AM

Beautiful poem. How is your wife doing? Still busy with the book writing? I hope she is well. I miss her poems.

Sara Baker
Date: 7/18/2025 4:42:00 PM

how kind of you to ask, Jay. I'm fine and here on Poetry Soup if you want to visit my site. I'm well; hope you are as well, hugs, Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 7/18/2025 3:25:00 PM

e writing under her name, Sara Baker. Check out her newest poems, they're worth reading my friend. Bill

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/17/2025 8:48:00 PM

This is really beautiful, Bill; two should be as one. Wife and I are not only romantic companions, but we are best friends. I wish all couples to have the same support and joy. Wonderful, positive write!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 10:00:00 PM

Thanks for the kind comments, Joe. God has blessed us greatly by bringing us together. We've had our challenges just like everyone else, but Love has won the battles for us. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 7/17/2025 7:46:00 PM

So romantic, love how you both write!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 10:02:00 PM

Retirement has given us both a chance to contemplate life and write about our thoughts through poetry. Thanks for the supportive comments, Paige. We both appreciate you and your poetry. Bill