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A Path To Walk

A path to walk, would that be fate? that fear of dark, would I abate? souls of profound bonds seldom found barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground quiet calls to trace in timeless rate. Would inner rhythm dictate heart abode or be it blind date? or just to a world be spellbound? A path to walk To each step there should be a date for every choice time wouldn't wait roamers seek not the Self imbound on divine journeys, souls unbound feed heart and open wide mind's gate A path to walk.

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/24/2020 10:22:00 PM

This is a beautiful journey to your inner thoughts...Magnificent

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/26/2020 5:11:00 PM

So sincere and beautiful are your words, Pashang.. It is my great pleasure and an honour to receive such feedback from you. My deepest regards and blessings.

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/13/2020 9:54:00 PM

I wonder, is the Path predestin...a Path is a purpose. It is challenging to identify and understand our purposes throughout Life, regardless we are always on a path hence, we always have purpose whether we know it or not. Your poetry provokes deep thoughts Poetess...J.A.B.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/14/2020 4:09:00 PM

What is really true is that feeling that we are the ones behind every single choice in our life journey! Thank you so much, Justin, for sharing your deep thoughts.. A great pleasure receiving your wonderful feedback! Best regards and blessings.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2020 12:24:00 PM

This delightful poem of yours brings many thoughts to mind, Besma. I see that you think things over well before making a decision, definitely not impulsive! Personally I think before I jump, but once a decision is made I stick to it.....to me it would be the right one! ~ Warm regards and blessings, my friend. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/22/2020 2:47:00 PM

Yes, Paul, the mind is the master! And I see you a soul crowned with the beauty of wisdom! A great pleasure reading your sincere feedback.. thank you so much for the honour of your visit.. warmest wishes and regards. Blessings to you.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/11/2019 3:53:00 AM

My son (who is a very enlightened Soul I feel), and I were talking the other day, about the paths we have travelled. I said to him, do you think we always travelled the right one? He answered "I didn't think we had a choice? Every path we journeyed has led us to this point, precisely where we are supposed to be". I thought that was quite profound, and I see exactly where you are walking Besma. My dearest friend,every path you choose is the right one. A brilliant poem, your choice of words as always is divine....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/15/2019 4:10:00 AM

A spitting image of your beautiful and insightful soul, is your son, dearest Maria.. indeed, it is very deep and complex the path to take or meant to take.. that very thin thread between Choice and God's Will.. much more to be said than my humble work can meet.. I'm so glad you feel my words .. my warmest wishes and regards. Blessings and love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/4/2019 1:51:00 PM

We all have to choose a path or in fact many paths during the course of our lives, and hopefully our faith, upbringing, norms and ethics, will guide us all in the right direction - Besma, I love your write and I love you! Your soul sister, Jenny.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 4:00:00 PM

Blessed to have you as a dear friend, soul sister.. very touched by your beautiful and kind words, dear Jenny.. thank you so much for watering my soul with your sincere love.. my love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/24/2019 12:59:00 AM

A Choice is always needed dear Besma in life, right or left, black or white, what do we wear, what do we say - a path is always there, that is what makes each one of us unique. God gave us this gift of choice - your poem is powerful and speaks volumes to us - well penned my friend. Hugs and love Jennifer. Hugs, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/24/2019 3:25:00 AM

Dear Jenny, my soul sister.. every single word that drips from your pen is dipped into your huge well of love and beauty.. every appreciation that flows from a beautiful mind reaches and enriches my very soul.. thank you so much for your humility and generosity.. my love and hugs. Blessings to you.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 10/23/2019 4:15:00 PM

Very profound Besma! I had to read it a few times to understand it. I like the last lines a lot! Unbound souls do feed the heart and open mind's doors. Absolutely beautiful poem!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/24/2019 3:18:00 AM

Deeply humbled and touched by your genuine feedback, Smita.. an honour and a great pleasure to read such uplifting and praising words.. thank you so much for being here to read my humble work and add beauty to my soul.. warmest wishes and regards.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/23/2019 2:52:00 PM

Very meaningful is your poem, Besma..every verse an insight in life..skillfully delivered, as always. I like the form of your poem..I am saving this in my FAVES.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/24/2019 3:15:00 AM

A huge thank you from the bottom of my heart for your sincere and continuous support to my humble work, dear Vijay.. it is my great delight reading your wonderful feedback and genuine appreciation.. my sincere gratitude.. Regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2019 2:25:00 PM

You did this very well, there is always a path we must choose, we never really know which one is the correct one..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/24/2019 3:10:00 AM

Always a great pleasure to read your response to my humble poetry, Silent One.. always grateful to have your support and encouragement.. thank you so much.. deepest regards and blessings.

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/23/2019 1:04:00 PM

Yes, the YOU walks the Path... Nice Poetry here...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/24/2019 3:08:00 AM

Arturo, I would like to thank you for your graceful presence and genuine support.. my honour and pleasure.. Regards and blessings.