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A Patch Of Blue Hello my friend, if I may be so bold to say. It has been a while since we had last spoke. I do not know, what I had done. Call, we need to talk. Okay, Bye. 2019 May 25 *1st Place* Charlieku New Form ~~charles messina

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Early Jae

Date: 5/28/2019 2:02:00 PM

Congrats!! This is so powerful in so little words, great!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/28/2019 2:18:00 PM

Plain and simple, yet the message conveyed--took it, Thanks Early Rae, Aloha wk

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/27/2019 5:27:00 AM

Wow! So well-expressed... Congratulations. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/27/2019 5:58:00 AM

In all honesty, Beata, I thought it to be so raw and simplistic that I almost planned to remove myself from the contest, but I thought it conveyed a message, however plain it appears to be, apparently, 'twas the message afterall, my extended courtesies for your pleasantries Beata, Aloha William Kekaula

Eve Roper

Date: 5/26/2019 9:44:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2019 9:11:00 PM

You are very welcome...….

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/27/2019 5:50:00 AM

I don't remember if I said anything to you re your contest, wherein, I came in 1st Place on your list, but with you here now--putting dementia aside--I'd like to give you a belated shout out, "T-H-A-N-K-S!" and 'tis a given for this here win as well, Aloha William Kekaula

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2019 1:51:00 PM

- Congratulations on your top placement in Charlie's contest :) - Excellent written, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/25/2019 2:00:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise (what a pretty name), I say it with a giddy-grin and eyes like a hooting owl, Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2019 1:15:00 PM

Back with congrats!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/25/2019 1:21:00 PM

Your first breath of life, gave its existence, you're forever in my heart Kim, Aloha William

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/25/2019 7:48:00 AM

Golden blew. Congrats, William)

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/25/2019 11:15:00 AM

You have my thanks my friend Kurt, Aloha wk

Charles Messina

Date: 5/25/2019 7:33:00 AM

You have expressed what people need to do more often. Connect with friends or family by stepping up and showing that you still care and are still alive. Love this. Congratulations William on your 1st place win. ~Charlie

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/25/2019 11:17:00 AM

Though I may have a lost of worthy words to say, only because it is deep within my heart~Aloha charles, Mahalo, William Kekaula

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/14/2019 1:09:00 PM

Hope your friend calls From I have seen of you via your poetry, it's your friends loss. Life moves on and like the tides, brings in new, glorious friends, Panagiota

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/14/2019 1:20:00 PM

Loss big time yeah, thanks again for your input Panagiota, Aloha wk

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/14/2019 8:20:00 AM

Sweet. I love the layout of your poem for your theme. I think it's my favorite "form" and tend to use it a lot.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/14/2019 9:32:00 AM

Yeah, somewhat a bit of a stretch, eh, thanks, Aloha wk

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/14/2019 7:25:00 AM

Everyone can relate to this William..so well said!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/14/2019 7:42:00 AM

Sounds too familiar man, thanks Vijay, Aloha wk

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2019 5:51:00 AM

I had a cousin ditch me from fb because of what my husband posted! And found out he ditched my Aunt too. Was sad and heartbroken bur what can you do. Nevertheless I hope you hear from your friend. Nice one!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/14/2019 1:05:00 PM

Kim, sorry you were hurt that way. I gave up hopin on people. We want them back but they are gone. You are well loved here Kim. Paagiota

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/14/2019 6:18:00 AM

What? Man, that is so sad and family too, thanks Kim, Aloha wk