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A Pastoral Tragi-Comedy

A pastoral tragi-comedy – twelve hours long. It begins with twilight: the day’s oozing hours, Creating somber music of a melancholic song: The theme song to mourn fall of day's powers. Night rain begins to flood the glamorous plain, Inspiring dark shadows to release, stormy reign. Each sneaks in, tiptoeing, after a helpless pray, Seizes or play with it before, the dawn of day. This classic tale does not, thus, miserably end. Moon, the dimmed lantern, with her fireflies Leaves all, yet allowing sovereign sun to send, Crystal rays to dawn the day, and cease our cries. *A 1st Place*in the following contest (judged on Oct. 23, 2020) Submitted on Oct. 22, 2020 To Brian Strand's Poetry contest: COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (31)any form any theme Poetry Contest (Posted on Oct. 18, 2020) * A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 21, 2020) Collaboration with the Silent One Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 10/22/2020 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Newton, love your imagery in your poem. Hugs Eve
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/22/2020 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for this great comment and the kind encouragement!!
Date: 10/21/2020 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/21/2020 3:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for the placement, Silent One!!
Date: 10/20/2020 1:22:00 AM
- A beautiful whole through this collaboration, Newton ... you painted a beautiful poetic picture :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/20/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this immensely great comment!!
Date: 10/18/2020 7:59:00 PM
Newton, I was floating with your beautiful depiction of night pastures. The first line is so brilliant, clever. 'oozing hours' I Iove.! 'dimmed lantern' so good! A most majestic entry. Sure Winner.!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/18/2020 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for your close read and the amazingly great comment!!

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