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A Past Long Gone

My father worked the land with Both horse and tractor plough. That family way of life is past, We are all city dwellers now. My father and mother dead My brother followed them on I’m the last of that generation And my country links are gone. In the churchyard family graves, Their once turfed burial mound Unmarked by stone, are now sunk To be level with the ground. I use words to paint for grandchildren Pictures of working days on the land, Of much less complicated times: And I know they try to understand But i am just grandad reminiscing When I tell of past country ways. They try listen patiently, but We are all connected these days. After a while their patience goes. They feel the call to be on line To worlds more exciting than That long passed one of mine. So I dream of Fordson tractors And the tall powerful Shire horse And they dream of things From their more modern source. I wish them long and rich life Happy and with good health, Sad they’ll not experience my world Once rich in everything but wealth.

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Date: 3/30/2023 8:31:00 PM
Your grandchildren are blessed Terry. They and your great great grandchildren will have a bevy of your wonderful poems to delight, teach, entertain, and enlighten them. They may not realise it now, but trust me, your poems will be treasured. (every one, to, if she dies , she dies, to the extractor fan, Miss Etty Kitt and all in between. I could go on for ages mentioning all my favourites and they will too someday.)
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 1:00:00 AM
don't really know what to say ti that other than thanks Wen. I just don't want all this family and social history yo disappear.
Date: 3/30/2023 9:30:00 AM
This is a really bittersweet write, Terry. The sadness of what used to be and the sweetness of your grandchildren's future. I'll bet you are a wonderful grandfather:)
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. I think we all have our treasured childhood moments, but I do think my generation were blessed. The Second World War just over and such a bright future ahead. I do worry for the future for the grandchildren.
Date: 3/30/2023 8:45:00 AM
You’ve captured your life as it once was perfectly, Terry, with a poignant contrast to the lives of kids growing up today. I think they’re missing out on a lot more than what we might have missed…
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 1:05:00 AM
I think you're spot on ilene. I'm so glad I'm mu age and nort just starting out on life.
Date: 3/30/2023 8:02:00 AM
This is beautiful! I really enjoyed this poem, the sadness at the outset and the sentiment throughout. It's similar but not to the one I've drafted to Unseeking Seekers contest about grieving loss but still being a bond that holds the hands of children and connects them to the past. So I was exactly in the right frame of mind to read this
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 1:11:00 AM
Have just been reading a few of your works Dilly, catching up. Keep up the good work
Date: 3/30/2023 4:59:00 AM
I enjoyed the read Terry. I don't remember horse ploughs but remember seeing them on a TV programme in the 60s / 70s called Out Of Town. I do wonder if kids miss out on using their imaginations when playing today. It's all 'like without reading' and thousands of TV channels isn't it? Cheers - Gary
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 1:15:00 AM
Thanks Gary. I think they probably do. I always think the best way to "see" a play is on the radio. Create your own pictures as it goes along. I wouldn't want to turn times completely back but i do believe we have lost a lot.

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