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Budgies - Problem Parrots

A Parakeet Green


A parakeet green that I named Eugene
and early in the mornings he will stir
chirping and flapping his wings in a blur.
It is quite a wild energetic scene . . . 
I swear, I do not give Eugene caffeine
from this bird-   I needed a silencer !
      A parakeet green . . . 

Lively and bouncy like a jumping bean
I cannot, his spirited joy-   deter
and I am for sure no bird whisperer . . . 
He gives kisses-   and a love unforeseen!
     A parakeet green . . . 

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October 14, 2022


Poetry/Rondine/other/A Parakeet Green
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1494-335-14
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France 

Written for the Standard contest, Rousing Rondine
sponsor, Jeff Kyser, Judged 11/21/2022

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Just great Constance! We used to raise parakeets when I was a kid. I loved all the beautiful colors, but they were quite talkative. Congratulations on your win! :)
La France Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the visit, comment, congratulations and compliment, appreciate ! Parakeets are beautiful like flying gems but oh so loud.
Alex Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 7:57 PM
"Lively and bouncy like a jumping bean" - Beautiful.
La France Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 11:07 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, appreciate !
Peck Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Love your parakeet poem! I had a pair of lovebirds, but turned out they were both male :) A black mask, who said lots of words and a Peach, who just blabbed. :) Different sources. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 12:58 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the visit, comment and congratulations, appreciate !
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 5:25 PM
Delightfully adorable. Love all the internal rhyme. Charming ~
La France Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:27 AM
Line, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings Constance
Leffanta Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:23 AM
well done! Aloha!
La France Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:27 AM
Rico, thank you so much for the compliment, Aloha and blessings Constance
Hankins Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Lovely poem about your little friend, Constance. I think Jeff will like it!
La France Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, I hope Jeff likes it too, blessings Constance
Poet Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Constance, you have such a gift for writing. Your vivid imagery, along with the elegant use of words, added an additional layer of splendor to the amazing poetry you wrote.
La France Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the the compliment on my writing and the poem, and lovely comment, appreciate, blessings Constance
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