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A Parakeet Green

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A parakeet green that I named Eugene and early in the mornings he will stir chirping and flapping his wings in a blur. It is quite a wild energetic scene . . . I swear, I do not give Eugene caffeine from this bird- I needed a silencer ! A parakeet green . . . Lively and bouncy like a jumping bean I cannot, his spirited joy- deter and I am for sure no bird whisperer . . . He gives kisses- and a love unforeseen! A parakeet green . . . _______________________ October 14, 2022 Poetry/Rondine/other/A Parakeet Green Copyright Protected, ID 10-1494-335-14 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Rousing Rondine sponsor, Jeff Kyser, Judged 11/21/2022 Third Place

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/22/2022 7:22:00 AM

Just great Constance! We used to raise parakeets when I was a kid. I loved all the beautiful colors, but they were quite talkative. Congratulations on your win! :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2022 11:07:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for the visit, comment, congratulations and compliment, appreciate ! Parakeets are beautiful like flying gems but oh so loud.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/21/2022 7:57:00 PM

"Lively and bouncy like a jumping bean" - Beautiful.

Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2022 11:07:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, appreciate !

Ann Peck

Date: 11/21/2022 10:01:00 AM

Love your parakeet poem! I had a pair of lovebirds, but turned out they were both male :) A black mask, who said lots of words and a Peach, who just blabbed. :) Different sources. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2022 12:58:00 PM

Ann, thank you so much for the visit, comment and congratulations, appreciate !

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/14/2022 5:25:00 PM

Delightfully adorable. Love all the internal rhyme. Charming ~

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2022 6:27:00 AM

Line, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings Constance

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/14/2022 11:23:00 AM

well done! Aloha!

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2022 6:27:00 AM

Rico, thank you so much for the compliment, Aloha and blessings Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/14/2022 9:10:00 AM

Lovely poem about your little friend, Constance. I think Jeff will like it!

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2022 6:28:00 AM

Milt, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, I hope Jeff likes it too, blessings Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/14/2022 7:56:00 AM

Constance, you have such a gift for writing. Your vivid imagery, along with the elegant use of words, added an additional layer of splendor to the amazing poetry you wrote.

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2022 6:29:00 AM

Sotto, thank you so much for the the compliment on my writing and the poem, and lovely comment, appreciate, blessings Constance