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A Pair of Shoes

Sturdy striding shoes You searched for resplendent hues Among common folk Vincent, did you know That the kingdom of heaven Flowed from your paintbrush? Based on the painting "A Pair of Shoes" - Written for Abe Lopez's "Van Gogh's Van Goghs" contest http://images.teamsugar.com/files/upl0/12/129120/04_2008/VanGoghShoes.jpg

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Date: 10/11/2009 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest, Corinne !!
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Date: 10/8/2009 12:50:00 PM
I think a lot of people would like to ask him that question. I don't think he knew though. I really like that you put a question in your choka. I've never seen that before. It flows nicely. Congratulations on placing in the contest!
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:14:00 AM
Terrific write Corinne, congratulations on your fifth placing in Abe's contest >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 9:18:00 AM
what a clever write...you are GOOD. Congrats on your fine win. BG
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Date: 10/8/2009 7:51:00 AM
What a wonderful twist in the contest and a great winning poem!! ~ Congrats!~ Carrie
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Date: 10/8/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest Corinne. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2009 11:54:00 PM
Dear Connie, This is a Magnificent Choka. Congratulations on your win in Abe's Contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/7/2009 9:44:00 PM
I was so glad to see your success with your poem in the contest! Great work, Corinne! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/7/2009 8:26:00 PM
Corinne, congrats on your success in Abe's contest...Raul
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Date: 9/12/2009 7:53:00 PM
What a lovely interpretation of Van Gogh's painting. He is one of my favorite artists and I love the way he used color in "resplendent hues." I think he died not realizing how much his work would be valued posthumously. Sad, isn't it? Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2009 6:05:00 PM
thanks for supporting my contest corinne!!!!
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Date: 9/12/2009 6:02:00 PM
gorgeous choka! Corinne!...jim
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:33:00 PM
I love the unusual twist to your entry!! Excellent writing, Corinne!! ~ Carrie
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