Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

A Pair of Doting Plants

Thinking of you I levitate on a joyous ride
Holding in my sight your cheerful eyes
Visualizing the contours of your paradise
Where longing hearts made a garden inside,

In that garden reside a pair of doting plants
Blossoming vibrant flowers of divine charm
Emanating ardent fragrance of romance
Adorned delicately with euphoric stance,

Lost in this euphoria are souls love sought
Showcasing a life filled with thrilling dance
Elegantly swirling moves of passion around
Holding each other closely in jubilant pause,

Holding pause, you hear my amorous voice
Longing for you to be transfixed by my side.
Hearing sensual vibes I sense your reply--
Anything short of forever is not a long time,

Rejoiced by your cue, my mind occupies you
Reverberating cadence of our secret song,
As the lyrics I heard echo from your heart
Holding my eternal love in forever trance.

February 12, 2018
First place: Romantic poem contest by Silent One
Placed first: Brian's Choice G Contest

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Valsa George March 28, 2023 at 8:41 PM "Reverberating cadence of our secret song,/ As the lyrics I heard echo from your heart/ Holding my eternal love in forever trance.".... Lovely lines and a poem of wonderfully romantic flavor !

Lonna Blodgett May 17, 2020 at 5:57 PM I don't think I will ever think of "doting" the same again. Beautiful. Lonna

Paula Goldsmith May 17, 2020 at 1:09 PM Congratulations on your win. You always write beautiful poems. Enjoy your win and day...............

Suzanne Delaney May 17, 2020 at 6:02 AM Congratulations on your top placement, Vijay: I just love this line...” Where longing hearts made a garden inside,” and the whole poem is altogether delightful. SuZ

Aditi Mishra May 17, 2020 at 3:17 AM A refreshing colourful and soothing tale of romance, so beautifully adorned by your words. You capture the images wonderfully. Congratulations on your well-deserved win Vijay :)

Gregory Richard Barden May 17, 2020 at 3:09 AM Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Vijay - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2019 at 2:34 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Brandy Nicole January 22, 2019 at 10:31 PM Oh my!!! Such vivid images you paint with your words. Every moment is magical, beautiful and simply breathtaking. This line is my favorite, yet I don't know why. "Rejoiced by your cue, my mind occupies you." The entire poem is amazing. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Heidi Sands January 20, 2019 at 7:04 AM Congratulations for this beautiful win Vijay! I love it :)

Vladislav Raven December 24, 2018 at 4:27 AM Hi Vijay, another masterful and creative write from your pen. The romance shines from your pen. How wonderful it is too read your lines my friend. Have a wonderful Christmas. Your friend always....Nuje.

Rhoda Tripp February 20, 2018 at 7:14 PM "anything short of forever is not a long time" and "my mind occupies you", two of my favorite, descriptive lines. Beautiful write here.

Eve Roper February 13, 2018 at 10:46 PM Congratulations on your win, Vijay, great romantic write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit February 14, 2018 at 12:12 PM Thank you Eve.

Probir Gupta February 13, 2018 at 10:04 PM Congratulations on your first place for this wonderful poem so powerfully written, Vijay ... Vijay Pandit February 14, 2018 at 12:11 PM Thank you Probir.

Chris Hagy February 13, 2018 at 3:48 PM Such a beautiful write Vijay :) I like the visual appearance as well...have a great day :) Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 5:58 PM Thank you Chris.. enjoyed reading your comments.

Mike Gentile February 13, 2018 at 12:53 PM Wow, this is extremely romantic Vijay, Beautiful !! Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:11 PM Thank you Mike.

Supraja Kannan February 13, 2018 at 7:09 AM Wow... So beautiful... Enjoyed it thoroughly... Great write... Congratulations on your well deserved win... Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:11 PM Thank you Supraja.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2018 at 3:10 AM - What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Vijay :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:11 PM Thank you Anne-Lise.

Carole Duet February 12, 2018 at 11:41 PM Very romantic indeed, Vijay. I love the last line. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:10 PM Thank you Carole.

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 12, 2018 at 11:36 PM Congratulations, Vijay on your first position win with a beautiful poem. The lines..."Visualizing the contours of your paradise Where longing hearts made a garden inside" are really appealing. Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:10 PM Thank you Subimal.

Lewis Raynes February 12, 2018 at 6:43 PM such a beautiful read Vijay, congratulations on ur first placement here Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:09 PM Thank you Lewis.

Paul Callus February 12, 2018 at 5:15 PM Beautiful and definitely romantic, Vijay! Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 2:09 PM Thank you Paul.

Silent One February 12, 2018 at 4:53 PM A poem that reads so well Vijay, I like where you took this ocntest... Great analogy and some great romantic lines.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Kelli White February 12, 2018 at 3:11 PM I love the harmony. Ethereal beauty of nature Vijay Pandit February 12, 2018 at 4:48 PM Thank you Kelli..appreciate your comments.

Judith S February 12, 2018 at 1:46 PM Beautiful Vijay! Many great lines .. but my favorite ... Anything short of forever is not a long time <3 Best of luck in the contest! ~ Judy Vijay Pandit February 12, 2018 at 4:48 PM Thank you Judy...enjoyed reading your comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2018 at 12:43 PM - A heavenly beautiful and romantic song ... as a perfect summer day, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit February 12, 2018 at 4:47 PM Thank you Anne-Lise..enjoyed reading your comments.