A Pair of Doting Plants

Thinking of you I levitate on a joyous ride Holding in my sight your cheerful eyes Visualizing the contours of your paradise Where longing hearts made a garden inside, In that garden reside a pair of doting plants Blossoming vibrant flowers of divine charm Emanating ardent fragrance of romance Adorned delicately with euphoric stance, Lost in this euphoria are souls love sought Showcasing a life filled with thrilling dance Elegantly swirling moves of passion around Holding each other closely in jubilant pause, Holding pause, you hear my amorous voice Longing for you to be transfixed by my side. Hearing sensual vibes I sense your reply-- Anything short of forever is not a long time, Rejoiced by your cue, my mind occupies you Reverberating cadence of our secret song, As the lyrics I heard echo from your heart Holding my eternal love in forever trance. February 12, 2018 First place: Romantic poem contest by Silent One Placed first: Brian's Choice G Contest
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Date: 3/28/2023 8:41:00 PM
"Reverberating cadence of our secret song,/ As the lyrics I heard echo from your heart/ Holding my eternal love in forever trance.".... Lovely lines and a poem of wonderfully romantic flavor !
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Date: 5/17/2020 5:57:00 PM
I don't think I will ever think of "doting" the same again. Beautiful. Lonna
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Date: 5/17/2020 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You always write beautiful poems. Enjoy your win and day...............
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Date: 5/17/2020 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement, Vijay: I just love this line...” Where longing hearts made a garden inside,” and the whole poem is altogether delightful. SuZ
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Date: 5/17/2020 3:17:00 AM
A refreshing colourful and soothing tale of romance, so beautifully adorned by your words. You capture the images wonderfully. Congratulations on your well-deserved win Vijay :)
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Date: 5/17/2020 3:09:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Vijay - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
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Date: 2/9/2019 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2019 10:31:00 PM
Oh my!!! Such vivid images you paint with your words. Every moment is magical, beautiful and simply breathtaking. This line is my favorite, yet I don't know why. "Rejoiced by your cue, my mind occupies you." The entire poem is amazing. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/20/2019 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful win Vijay! I love it :)
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Date: 12/24/2018 4:27:00 AM
Hi Vijay, another masterful and creative write from your pen. The romance shines from your pen. How wonderful it is too read your lines my friend. Have a wonderful Christmas. Your friend always....Nuje.
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Date: 2/20/2018 7:14:00 PM
"anything short of forever is not a long time" and "my mind occupies you", two of my favorite, descriptive lines. Beautiful write here.
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, great romantic write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/14/2018 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 2/13/2018 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place for this wonderful poem so powerfully written, Vijay ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/14/2018 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 2/13/2018 3:48:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Vijay :) I like the visual appearance as well...have a great day :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 5:58:00 PM
Thank you Chris.. enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 2/13/2018 12:53:00 PM
Wow, this is extremely romantic Vijay, Beautiful !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Mike.
Date: 2/13/2018 7:09:00 AM
Wow... So beautiful... Enjoyed it thoroughly... Great write... Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Supraja.
Date: 2/13/2018 3:10:00 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Vijay :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/12/2018 11:41:00 PM
Very romantic indeed, Vijay. I love the last line. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Carole.
Date: 2/12/2018 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your first position win with a beautiful poem. The lines..."Visualizing the contours of your paradise Where longing hearts made a garden inside" are really appealing.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 2/12/2018 6:43:00 PM
such a beautiful read Vijay, congratulations on ur first placement here
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Lewis.
Date: 2/12/2018 5:15:00 PM
Beautiful and definitely romantic, Vijay! Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 2/12/2018 4:53:00 PM
A poem that reads so well Vijay, I like where you took this ocntest... Great analogy and some great romantic lines.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:11:00 PM
I love the harmony. Ethereal beauty of nature
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Kelli..appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/12/2018 1:46:00 PM
Beautiful Vijay! Many great lines .. but my favorite ... Anything short of forever is not a long time <3 Best of luck in the contest! ~ Judy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Judy...enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 2/12/2018 12:43:00 PM
- A heavenly beautiful and romantic song ... as a perfect summer day, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..enjoyed reading your comments.
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