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A Pair of Doting Plants

Thinking of you I levitate on a joyous ride Holding in my sight your cheerful eyes Visualizing the contours of your paradise Where longing hearts made a garden inside, In that garden reside a pair of doting plants Blossoming vibrant flowers of divine charm Emanating ardent fragrance of romance Adorned delicately with euphoric stance, Lost in this euphoria are souls love sought Showcasing a life filled with thrilling dance Elegantly swirling moves of passion around Holding each other closely in jubilant pause, Holding pause, you hear my amorous voice Longing for you to be transfixed by my side. Hearing sensual vibes I sense your reply-- Anything short of forever is not a long time, Rejoiced by your cue, my mind occupies you Reverberating cadence of our secret song, As the lyrics I heard echo from your heart Holding my eternal love in forever trance. February 12, 2018 First place: Romantic poem contest by Silent One Placed first: Brian's Choice G Contest

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Valsa George

Date: 3/28/2023 8:41:00 PM

"Reverberating cadence of our secret song,/ As the lyrics I heard echo from your heart/ Holding my eternal love in forever trance.".... Lovely lines and a poem of wonderfully romantic flavor !

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 5/17/2020 5:57:00 PM

I don't think I will ever think of "doting" the same again. Beautiful. Lonna

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2020 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. You always write beautiful poems. Enjoy your win and day...............

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/17/2020 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your top placement, Vijay: I just love this line...” Where longing hearts made a garden inside,” and the whole poem is altogether delightful. SuZ

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/17/2020 3:17:00 AM

A refreshing colourful and soothing tale of romance, so beautifully adorned by your words. You capture the images wonderfully. Congratulations on your well-deserved win Vijay :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/17/2020 3:09:00 AM

Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Vijay - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2019 2:34:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/22/2019 10:31:00 PM

Oh my!!! Such vivid images you paint with your words. Every moment is magical, beautiful and simply breathtaking. This line is my favorite, yet I don't know why. "Rejoiced by your cue, my mind occupies you." The entire poem is amazing. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/20/2019 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations for this beautiful win Vijay! I love it :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/24/2018 4:27:00 AM

Hi Vijay, another masterful and creative write from your pen. The romance shines from your pen. How wonderful it is too read your lines my friend. Have a wonderful Christmas. Your friend always....Nuje.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 2/20/2018 7:14:00 PM

"anything short of forever is not a long time" and "my mind occupies you", two of my favorite, descriptive lines. Beautiful write here.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2018 10:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Vijay, great romantic write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/14/2018 12:12:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/13/2018 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place for this wonderful poem so powerfully written, Vijay ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/14/2018 12:11:00 PM

Thank you Probir.

Chris Hagy

Date: 2/13/2018 3:48:00 PM

Such a beautiful write Vijay :) I like the visual appearance as well...have a great day :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Chris.. enjoyed reading your comments.

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/13/2018 12:53:00 PM

Wow, this is extremely romantic Vijay, Beautiful !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Mike.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/13/2018 7:09:00 AM

Wow... So beautiful... Enjoyed it thoroughly... Great write... Congratulations on your well deserved win...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Supraja.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2018 3:10:00 AM

- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Vijay :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Carole Duet

Date: 2/12/2018 11:41:00 PM

Very romantic indeed, Vijay. I love the last line. Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Carole.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/12/2018 11:36:00 PM

Congratulations, Vijay on your first position win with a beautiful poem. The lines..."Visualizing the contours of your paradise Where longing hearts made a garden inside" are really appealing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Subimal.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/12/2018 6:43:00 PM

such a beautiful read Vijay, congratulations on ur first placement here

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Lewis.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/12/2018 5:15:00 PM

Beautiful and definitely romantic, Vijay! Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/13/2018 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Silent One

Date: 2/12/2018 4:53:00 PM

A poem that reads so well Vijay, I like where you took this ocntest... Great analogy and some great romantic lines.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..