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A Painting

It's a quaint little street, bustling with tourists Shops selling ice creams and coffees, sandals, and seashells... People rushing, a bike or two in the street, a car searching for a place to park A baby cries, and mothers wipe sticky faces....chatter, and laughter.. One small gallery, tucked descreetly, into the narrow cobblestone alley A blinding ray of sun's reflection, catches my attention The window display, filled with seascapes, antique sailing artifacts And one small painting....sitting, poised, proudly on an easel... At first the glare makes it hard to see But I cup my hands around my eyes... A lovely rendition of this very same village Painted many years ago...long before tourists Long before lattes and souvenirs... Just a little fishing village...dated 1918 The houses wearing chalky patina, Narrow lanes leading away from the main road, dipping down into golden sand dunes, A small general store and a blacksmith shop, Seagulls gliding like angel wings against the summer blue White steepled churches slumbering in the warm afternoon sunshine The quietness, the peaceful nature of it....simple and serene... And I think to myself, ...how extraordinary it would be If I could freeze time for a day, If I could pull it out and visit it...just once in awhile If I could bring it back now and again....that peaceful afternoon... Walk in warm sunshine, Where the leaves would never fall from those ancient trees, And the gentle slopes would never know the cruel blast of winter storms Where tears had never fallen, where age was timeless If time could stand still..... I hears the tinkle of the bell, as I enter the shop...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/25/2009 6:09:00 PM
This is an illustration, that came to life... I almost felt the seashells, tasted the ices... not to be facetious with words, but this was really charming, simply charming, Truly... Nice Flow of Thoughts. MoonBee
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Carrie. I look forward to reading more of it as usual. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol
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Date: 10/24/2009 5:44:00 AM
Beautifully imagined and painted. I love it. I like its style, and it goes to my fav's. Gidds
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Date: 10/24/2009 3:36:00 AM
Wonderful visual, story line Carrie!I felt as one with you on this amazing walk, didn't want it to end. How many times have I heard the tinkle of the bell, smile. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful, inspiring weekend! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/23/2009 9:42:00 PM
thanks for bringing us along! Carrie! what a wonderful narrative! yes, your last line is magical!... jim
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Date: 10/23/2009 7:39:00 PM
Lovely..... great work. Pam.x
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Date: 10/23/2009 7:06:00 PM
Amazing narrative, that last line of the bell rings a great truth when walking into these old shops. Nice work...Raul
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