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A Once Steadfast Stream

The mistress to her lover: a once steadfast stream now flows dangerously low. . . . this valley grows dry His reply: at its mountain source the stream takes what nature gives hills depend on water too. . . . though valleys need streams snowfall was sparse this season for Debbie Guzzi's Contest: "Love Talks"

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:33:00 PM

enjoyable

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2012 4:13:00 PM

I'm journeying through your haiku writes. ah personification! Light & Love

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/10/2011 1:18:00 AM

Diggin the Haiku...and after a big Haiku, make sure you say Bless You ...HI-Choooooooo! -sneeze- and Bless You!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/23/2011 4:42:00 AM

Another one I have missed, Andrea! Great write, and thank you so much for your kind comments always!...Love, Gert

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/15/2011 2:57:00 PM

This is a lovely piece, Andrea:) it has real flow! Thanks for comment on Refresh, always appreciated!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/14/2011 4:56:00 AM

Awesome Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest, love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/13/2011 8:53:00 PM

Amazing Andear. No other word for this superb write. Warm congrats.

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/13/2011 7:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful, award-winning poem! Enjoyed your jilted-lover milieu.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in Deb's contest. Andrea, this is a nice pairing of haiku with tanka.

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 12:55:00 PM

Beautiful job, Andrea it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in second place honorable win, Agaape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/13/2011 12:29:00 PM

Awesome...congrats ..this was very deep..I love it. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/13/2011 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Debbie, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/13/2011 5:39:00 AM

metaphorically mesmerizing, Andrea. Awesome poem . great job of it. Congrats to you on a top win

Kash Poet

Date: 3/12/2011 8:12:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your big win in the contest!--kash

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2011 7:53:00 PM

boo! lol.. how are you as for me.. not so good.. now i have to work all by myself... sis is not helping me no more... oi.. well anyways... good luck in the contest.. interesting... p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2011 7:22:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your super win in Love Talk with this awesome dialogue between the lovers.. another chart topping win to enjoy with luv.. my friend...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2011 4:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win, Andrea! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/12/2011 3:55:00 PM

Very clever LAndrea. Congratulaions on your win. Love, Joyce

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/11/2011 6:24:00 AM

That is a very different poem and gives food for thought. Have a great day. love phyl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2011 9:08:00 AM

thankxx for all your dynamic comments Andrea.. playing catch up today since we took Tuesday off.. raining cats and dogs here so heavy.. so it's a poetry day for me luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2011 2:41:00 PM

Great one..Poor mistress..Reads like a winner..Good luck..Thanks for your continued support of my work by reading and commenting ....May your gift expand and overflow..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 3/9/2011 1:58:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea - and congratulations on your win : ) Jack

John Freeman

Date: 3/9/2011 11:20:00 AM

Cool job Andrea. Best of luck! I wrote "Stress on Toll road Express" sort of with your Joe in mind. I think he might relate to it if you can get him to read it.smile, Agape, Moses

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/9/2011 8:15:00 AM

Great job.I know you will do well.Yes,that poem is for Tell her Story contest.But strange thing happened I messed up by not putting the contest on the bottom,so went to edit,and it wouldn't pop up on the poem,or any info. on it.I hope it gets read?But if you go to my edit,you can see I put for contest.Man,I feel very strong about that poem.Anyways,good luck,and have A GREAT DAY!