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A Note In the Wind - Nw

 
"the wind is blowing and the air is full with my note . . ." Quote by _ Constance
oh, it has been awhile . . . since I visited your graves . . . so sorry but I keep your memory always ~ a cold, dark stone is engraved with your names your bones made into dust yet, I have written you a note . . . ~ as storms shake the ocean of my forever grief. . . and I am lost in my own words written on note papers that tremble and my hair is a flowing golden river in the wind I will read . . . ~ mom and dad . . . you are great grandparents to the sweetest angel baby girl you would love her smile ~ sorry, I was not the perfect daughter you deserved our road was rocky at times until I found my place and planted my roots but no matter you loved me mom, I planted you a garden in honor as you asked and treasure your last words in life . . . "I love you daughter" I will carry them in my "heart" forever . . . ~ my health could be better but I rise above that weeping- I admit that I feel cheated . . . by your deaths . . . oh, there is more written, much more . . . but I let the note go in the wind to drift among the graves bowing my head in tears . . . ~ ____________________ October 27, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/A Note In The Wind-NW Copyright Protected, ID 10-1497-268-27 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Note In The Wind sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 11/02/2022 Second Place
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Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:30 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Constance :)
La France Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Sunshine, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate
Messina Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Just another beautiful write from you, dear Constance. I love this! Congratulations on your placement in my contest...Charlie
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Charlie, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my placement, appreciate, and thanks for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Kauffman Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Constance, your note continues its journey into the winds that blow through my heart - winds of loss, grief yet also winds of remembered and anticipated joy of future blessings. Like your note we continue on with our heads high. Notes of best wishes to you for the contest. Blessings!
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Sam, thankyou so much for the lovely comment and encouragement, blessings
Kriticos Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 5:38 PM
This was a very special tear jerker...I appreciate you sharing it!
La France Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Kyle, thank you so much for the visit and your compassion and comment, blessings
Peck Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Your poem is very sad and beautiful, Constance. Best of luck in contest!
La France Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Ann, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement, blessings
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 11:30 AM
... oh dear ... this was very sensitive ... have to dry a tear and two ... best wishes in the contest, Constance - hugs
La France Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Sunhine, thank you so much for the comment and compassion, and encouragement, hugs and blessings
Roper Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Beautiful verse with great imagery and mourning feeling. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings to you my friend and wishes come true.
La France Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement, blessings
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