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A Note In the Wind

Thinking... Wondering... Should I, or should I not? But, I love her so... I wrote from my heart To her, from me... A note But it blew outside my window As I was driving in my car A let's-get-back-together- note Asking her "I was just wondering how you are?" She was lost driving in her travels So, she was looking at a map When the note I wrote flew in her window And it landed on her lap I said I'll meet you at the junction I'll be at the "Lonely Hearts Cafe" I'll be in the back at 5:00am And I'll be waiting, for you...all day I hope to see you, darling I know that we can work on things Like making love- beneath the stars again 'O Happiness, to me...it brings 5:00am that morning... I had showed up right on time And I thanked the Lord ten-million times Because...so did the love of mine A note From me to her... From my heart, I wrote I love her so...

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 10/29/2022 11:55:00 PM

Charles this is beautiful, no joke I cried as I read it. Gershon put it with 'A candle in the wind', I put it with the Pina Colada song, and I cried the first time I heard that too ( only yours is better). Thanks Charles I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/26/2022 10:24:00 AM

Don’t think Should you or Shouldn’t Just go ahead Enjoy. Have good days

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/25/2022 4:41:00 AM

This is magnifiqoe, I rank it as a POTD Huggs, Pangir,

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:26:00 PM

Aww...thank you, Pangie :) Hugs dear friend

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/23/2022 6:20:00 PM

This is right up there with Elton John's 'A Candle in the Wind,' written for Princess Diane's funeral... Well, would you believe it's right up there with Peter, Paul & Mary's 'Blowin' in the Wind?'... How 'bout the Association's 'Windy?'... Oh, never mind! (Enjoyed your write, no matter the comparisons, Charlie!) ~ Maxwell Smart, 'Agent 86'

Charles Messina
Date: 10/23/2022 6:27:00 PM

PS: love all the tunes you mentioned...now, I just need some instrumentals. (LOL) After all, "All we are is just in the wind" ~CM

Charles Messina
Date: 10/23/2022 6:25:00 PM

I'd have loved a response from "Agent 99" but this tops them all. Thank you, Gershon...so happy to hear from you, dear friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/23/2022 10:35:00 AM

A lovely, romantic poem. The ending delights! :)

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:27:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/23/2022 9:41:00 AM

Your words resonate, Charlie, in verses of love-- straight from the heart. Note in the wind reaches love!

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:27:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay! I appreciate your feedback and kind thoughts!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/23/2022 7:06:00 AM

This is so sweet. I really enjoyed this love story. ! :)

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/23/2022 6:14:00 AM

Charlie, such a romantic notion you have penned! I love the visuals created by your confection of poetic charm! Happy Sunday!!

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:29:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. Have a great week!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/22/2022 10:33:00 PM

This is beautiful!! What a precious poem!

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thank you, BJ... for the kind words. Have a nice week!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/22/2022 8:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely romantic story, Charles. Things like this happen to couples in love and who are meant to be together. I hope you are having a good weekend. Shirley.

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Shirley. Yes, things like this believe it or not do happen to couples in love :) have a wonderful week dear friend. Charlie

Arlo Parker

Date: 10/22/2022 6:49:00 PM

Very unique crafting and robust, tender storytelling. Thanx 4 posting, Charles. ~:o)

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:33:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words, Arlo. Thanks also for your contribution in poetry...keep up the great writes my friend. ~:o)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/22/2022 2:35:00 PM

Very movingly written, Charles. A life without love is poverty. Your poem, however, is rich in value. Best wishes, Brian

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:34:00 PM

Brian, great to hear from you. Life without love is poverty, well noted! Thanks also for your kind words. Hope all is well my friend. All the best...Charlie