A Note and Dance

happy new year to one and all
'may it be filled with everything good

"a note and dance"

on this eve as the year sails with the wind
we have a promise to keep and hold eternally
for friendships and memories never to be lost

we'll say I love you with a note and dance
a whisper and tango shared between us two
the moment is right for our hearts to beat

reflections of the year surface with love
showcasing a tender silhouette sitting proud
more precious than a store purchased jewel

on this eve as the year sails with the wind
we'll whisper and tango in our usual fashion
we'll say I love you with a note and dance

SkyWatcher
12-15-21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Your lovely poem has me reflecting on the only time I coaxed my husband to dance with me, forty years ago. I love to dance. It is one of the most romantic actions between a couple. A most wonderful poem my friend. Thank you for the memory returned to me. New year blessings xxoo
Ricci Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Dear Connie - Thank you once again. Happy New Year. May it be filled with everything good and more much more. Truly. May you always be surrounded with beauty… Remain safe and we’ll.
Deo Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Glad I got to come to this DELIGHTFUL 2022 New Year Dance, Lisa. shalom, shalom shalom! Health and healing in Jesus' Name; His Blood Has Many Secret Healings when called upon in Faith. "plead The Blood," the old-timers said. Namasthe, Namasthe, Namasthe to all our ancestral lands and positive energy (Qi/Chi).
Ricci Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Many blessings to you Anil. Truly. Thank you and happy new year. I’m honored you joined the dance and celebration. Shalom and Namaste always. I will return as as as I can. Remain safe please…
Horsman Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 6:42 PM
What a lovely poetic gem this is, Have yourself a wonderful festive season, my friend.
Ricci Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 2:58 AM
Good Morning hh - Thank you very much as always. I'm sorry for this very late response. May your words apply to you and your family as well. May it be festive happy healthy and much more. Happy New Year in advance. Remain safe. (peace)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Can't dance with you as I'm full or pain which comes and goes, bu I still wish you a Happy Christmas and a Merry New Year. May our friendship last. Hugs
Ricci Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Oh Victor - Good Morning - You make me cry with your message of pain. You will be in my thoughts and prayers. I'm so sorry for this late response. Yes, merry christmas to you also. I treasure our connection and friendship. Truly. May today be a good day in every way and all that it can be. Love and blessings always. Peace...
M  Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 10:32 PM
A lovely romantic poem Lisa….I think you may have a very sweet heart from the poems and the comments I read of yours. Enjoyed. Debx
M  Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Hey Lisa…..my words are very true….you come across to me as a very kind hearted lady. Your grandmother sounds like a lovely lady! Cheers Debx
Ricci Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 4:02 AM
Good Morning Deb - Thank you ever so much. Never do I take reviews or comments for granted be it good or bad. If you words are true (smile) the credit belongs to my grandmother who had the purest and biggest heart I knew. So thank you once again. May all know of love and may all reflect on this New Year's Eve. Enjoy the day and I will see you on your page very soon. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.
Cunningham Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Very romantic verse Lisa, nothing beats a dance with the one that you love. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Ricci Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Hello Tom - How true. Thank you ever so much for a beautiful and meaningful review. Truly. Have a wonderful night. Happy New Year in advance to you. Remain safe and healthy. Blessings...
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