A Nook and a Storybook

A Nook And A Story Book Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper

There was a day last week that I felt alone and sad,
   I carried days of grief and would pray for sweet dreams,
     I held onto a glimmer of hope when I had an idea,
       to get lost in my favorite book outside on the porch swing.

Sensuality of a solitary soul with desires of social freedom,
  pretty dear Edna lost inside a condemning creole heritage,
    although she loved the Gulf of Mexico and New Orleans,
     she had love affairs with charming men during her marriage.

Her appetite for passion wasn’t accepted in the nineteenth century,
   she craved lustful intimacy when it was strictly forbidden,
     Edna wanders around and finds herself within sexual promiscuity,
       in a small town news travels fast, even if she wanted it hidden.

Once wedded to the rich Leonce who traveled far too often,
  Edna yearned for the embrace of other appealing suitors,
    fantasizing beyond all common sense of comprehension,
       alas she was constantly damned by hypocritical persecutors.

Satisfactions and warm memories sooth her darkest nights,
   she thinks of her affair with Robert as she closes her eyes,
     so deeply did he love her, although she only craved his physique,
       she wore erotic moments on her back for a disguise.

Because of her rejection of the roles as a wife and mother,
   she was an outcast, a fading woman lost in fear and sorrow,
     no more love and lust to quench her deep thirst,
       she awakens…not wanting to face another tomorrow.

Drowning herself in the deep water of the Gulf of Mexico,
   released her from her miserable anguish she called home,
     no longer could another touch her the way she needed,
       she ended up living her last moments in despair while alone.


This poem is about the book "The Awakening" by Kate Chopin
The original name was "Solitary Soul"

Date Written: April 28, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/3/2016 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful placement in A Nook and a Storybook contest, Luloo! Now I know what Edna's Awakening is about! You're a hood story teller!
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Date: 5/2/2016 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/2/2016 8:43:00 AM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A wonderful write as always. Seek and be strong within. A great poem my friend, written well. This is a different but wonderful take on the contest and was so deserving to be on the winners list. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/2/2016 5:13:00 AM
Lovely write Laura.
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Date: 5/2/2016 3:54:00 PM
thank you James :)-luloo
Date: 5/1/2016 10:16:00 PM
This was a wonderful summary of the book you are reading. congratulation on your win. Hugs
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Date: 5/2/2016 4:35:00 PM
I love it :) Hugs
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Date: 5/2/2016 3:53:00 PM
thank you Eve! :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 7:57:00 PM
A great summary of that story, Laura. what a sad ending it had!! I am counting seven stanzas. didn't she say no more than six? Just a heads up, sweetie, 'coz I really like your poem.
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Date: 4/29/2016 7:32:00 AM
ooops!!! Thank you dear lady! Have a great day :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 4:37:00 PM
ohh, a daring, solid commentary.. wonderful piece, lou..huggs
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:32:00 PM
thank you sweet Nette :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 3:19:00 PM
This was required reading, and because it took place in my home area I hated every page. As a young romantic, I wanted to save her from death. You paid tribute to her is a kind manner. Nicely done, Laura.
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:31:00 PM
thank you lady :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 3:03:00 PM
Laura, that sure sounds like a wonderful book, great write for the contest, 7 ~
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:31:00 PM
thank you Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 2:37:00 PM
Such a vivid write you told a great story - so beautiful but what a sad ending to the tale LuLoo - makes me want to read the book:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:30:00 PM
thank you Jan :)-luloo
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