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A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory

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Luscinian voices in the thicket of a midnight waltz single male birds singing from a point of solitude closing down on city sounds inside a forest vault the sound of their vocals, nightingale's prelude calling in mates with whistles, trills and sounds sending messages of longing from across the throng listening from cup-shaped nests, eager to be found they wind up feeling drawn by their melodious song she, awake as the dawn and free as a bird in the sky he, as cuffed to her beauty as the wings on her back they mate on a branch as soft as a nightingale's sigh away from the songsters, who are trying but lack luscinian voices singing softly of dawn's pure glory two nightingales sharing life and love's true story . June 11, 2021

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/19/2021 3:07:00 PM

Mystic Rose Rose, Many wait a long time listening for the nightingale's song. Your poem has given true meaning to nature's finest call. Reward found in a new dawn; heart's strongest pull, the reply. -Richard

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/13/2021 6:24:00 PM

So beautifully romantic exhibited by way of Mother Nature and its wondrous creatures. "" luscinian voices singing softly of dawn's pure glory two nightingales sharing life and love's true story . "" Verses so brilliantly endearing and evident of love and its truest powers. A gem, a fav.. God bless..

Eve Roper

Date: 6/12/2021 8:27:00 PM

Beautiful, Mystic,

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/12/2021 1:38:00 PM

Really beautiful, truly romantic sonnet - You have penned, Mystic! The ending couplet is amazing! To my faves. Love ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/12/2021 1:05:00 PM

A romantic sonnet. Very well done. The sounds of the bird are exceptional. Hugs.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/12/2021 5:39:00 AM

Lovely, God bless you with love, Gina

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/12/2021 3:32:00 AM

A beautifully crafted poem, Mystic, the ending couplet is brilliant and so apt for the entire sonnet:)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/11/2021 4:29:00 PM

So natural the harmony in a raw Nature! So wonderful is your poetic rendition! So vivid is the scenic beauty! Nothing loftier than the amazing form of Sonnet to contain the loftiest of sentiments, Love shared! A great pleasure to read you, dear Mystic Rose! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/11/2021 1:23:00 PM

Romantic, like a slow waltz.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/11/2021 2:51:00 PM