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For Bitesize Contest No100 sponsored by Line Gauthier

A circle and a triangle went out to take the air one moonlit night upon Piccadilly Square, and to every heartbeat pound and every footfall plunk, the triangle said, "thunk a thunk a thunk". The circle said not a word, so silently did she move, ever good and graceful, she had nothing to prove.

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Date: 2/18/2025 12:00:00 PM
So clever! Agree, triangles definitely make that thunk noise. Congratulations on your win! Beau
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David Crandall
Date: 2/18/2025 12:16:00 PM
Haha, thanks Beau! As I think about it, adding more sides to a triangle, might improve its sound a bit.
Date: 2/16/2025 9:12:00 PM
Really Interesting. Big Congrats to win Top. Have Good Days.
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha - you too!
Date: 2/16/2025 6:05:00 PM
David, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this entertaining piece~~good use of symbols. Janice
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Janice, it's good to hear that you liked it!
Date: 2/16/2025 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this clever and delightful poem. It's a jaunty and fun read.
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 5:22:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Jan!
Date: 2/16/2025 2:01:00 PM
Excellent, congratulations
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Terry!

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