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A Night In The Forest

Dark forest quiet still Then awakes the katidyds Filling surroundings Dark forest quiet still Music envelopes Sound of the Whip Poor Will (Inspired By John Denver's Annie's Song)(Double Haiku)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/10/2009 5:37:00 PM
I like ' music envelopes' yes the whippoorwill always outside my window at night - katydids and crickets - classic summer.
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for reminding me how much Annie's Song "filled up my senses." This is a lovely son, Sara, and I've always been a big fan of John Denver. Hated to see him die; something beautiful was taken from this world. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful double Haiku Sara>>James
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Date: 7/10/2009 9:54:00 AM
beautiful my friend,just beautiful--charma
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Date: 7/10/2009 8:02:00 AM
Magical, Sara! Will we get the sleepy blue mountain and the walk in the rain? I love John's songs too ... miss him ... =(
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