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A New Sky

Feel the night Sheer delight Breathless sight Yes that’s right Northern lights Purplish red Greenish spread Wispy threads A tear shed Still not dead What's New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Mini-monoverse 5x3/5x3 Syllable counter PS 01/14/22

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Deb M

Date: 1/15/2022 7:19:00 AM

Sounds beautiful David …a lovely poem! Cheers Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/15/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Deb, I’ve only seen them on Tv and in books, some day I hope to Travel to the north of Norway and witness them in the flesh, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/15/2022 5:39:00 AM

David, you've created a beautiful poem that is also quite well written. I've heard great things about those lights, and I'm sure it's a breathtaking sight to see, but I hope to make it there one day.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/15/2022 6:08:00 AM

I think most people agree Lasaad, given the opportunity to see them they would take it, I certainly will, thank you for such kind comments, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/14/2022 12:48:00 PM

Hello David Kavangagh, I would like to see the Northern Lights. I hear it is a beautiful to view. Cheers!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2022 11:08:00 AM

Hello David, oh, i do agree. It would be something special to witness this special show. Cheers! Darlene.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2022 1:28:00 PM

It’s got to be a seminal moment in one’s life Darlene to witness such a show, I hope some day we will get to see them, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/14/2022 12:37:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Well written :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2022 1:24:00 PM

Heya Heidi, thank you so much, you have a wonderful Scandinavian name, I’m wondering if you ever seen the aurora, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2022 4:27:00 AM

My daughter went to Iceland a couple of years ago and said they were amazing to see, it's on my bucket list Enjoy your weekend David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2022 4:49:00 AM

Heya Tom definitely on my bucket list, for some reason the northernmost tip of Norway is my dream destination to witness them, happy weekend cheers David