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A New Place to Live

He told her come on baby, let’s pack up and leave this town. Cause living here just makes me, feel like I’m gonna drown. We will find that perfect place, somewhere we can settle down. I give you my word baby, we will quit roaming around. So they left that little town, from way back up in the sticks. Headed to those city lights, where they’d learn some brand-new tricks. A couple country bumpkins, nothing more than simple hicks. Soon got lost in the shuffle, and all stirred up in the mix. But as the days rolled on by, their hearts soon turned into stone. Though they still had each other they might as well been alone. When those Neon signs go out, city lights no longer call. All your pockets are empty, the love you had starts to stall. Living in the dark alleys, where daylight is never known. The needle, just like a knife, still can cut you to the bone. We try to make the right choice, doing our best to succeed. It’s hard to find the right path, around all the lies and greed. When you’re lost and full of hate, down is the only place left. Til despair convinces you, that the best way out is death.

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Date: 7/31/2024 2:59:00 PM
A dark write from you Jerry. Turn it upside down...if you're all the way down, they only direction is up! :)
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Date: 7/8/2024 1:38:00 PM
WOW!!! What a powerful yet very sad write. This is life for some. So Very Sad. The message is, get help before it is too late. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 7/8/2024 12:00:00 PM
I feel for the youth, others greed make it so hard for them to succeed in this world, love becomes a word and addiction becomes love....heartfelt Jerry. I see it everyday along the streets of L.A. xo~Anaya
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Date: 7/8/2024 10:26:00 AM
Hello Jerry, I can feel this poem's disillusionment along with sensing the consequences of seeking that change in all the wrong places. I always think that the grass is not always greener on the other side, and I really need to do my homework before I make that change. You laid out harshness in such eloquent words. A great message to the reader. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/7/2024 5:55:00 PM
Dark and darker, Jerry. Although can be so true. With no connections to or friends in the city, it's a killer of anonymous souls. Chilling write! One that resonates! ~ gw
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Date: 7/7/2024 5:23:00 PM
this is dark, dear poet, darkness of loneliness in the city lights, well done, this is true, thanks jerry
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Date: 7/7/2024 3:39:00 PM
WOW Jerry what a powerful write my friend! A story too familiar in this world of ours…..so very sad! So well written….Debx
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