A New Neighbor

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A new neighbor has moved in On the country place How do I know? I saw him Check out his space It is a small cedar cabin Above the grassy lawn There food is plentiful again Each day a chorus at dawn He is secretive and quiet Slips in and out door Gathers bugs for their diet Dew for this water source Just some jottings from about 5 years ago in the spring

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2017 1:10:00 PM

- An entertaining neighbor, Sara :) - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2017 3:52:00 AM

I really enjoyed you delightful write here this morning my friend! What a fantastic poem you have written with enormous skill! What you have written is astoundingly precious, I just love birds, and their song! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2017 6:31:00 AM

Russell, Thanks for the bubblings review..I can feel joy in what you write..The time spent reading my work is fully appreciated..Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/7/2017 8:55:00 PM

Sounds like a peaceful neighbor!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2017 6:30:00 AM

Vijay, Those Bluebirds are very peaceful and helpful by eating excess insects..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/7/2017 6:14:00 PM

I enjoyed this Sara! Cute! Thanks for sharing :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2017 6:45:00 PM

Heidi, Thanks for dropping by..I am so glad that you enjoyed my work..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Your presence is appreciated..Sara