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A New Lands Springtime Enchantment

Beyond the blue Atlantic’s jagged hem, across her briny depths, we sailed for days. We’d not forget earth’s fairest greenest gem which faded from our sad, collective gaze. When misty-eyed, we turned and faced the west, our bellies burned; our boat by waves was tossed. And yet, in one respect, I had been blessed. Enchantment followed me and was not lost. The strange new land had not our isle’s charm. But hunger left; I laughed and labored hard. I married; then I bought a little farm and loved to see the garden in my yard. For sometimes pretty faeries I would see. In springtime, Ireland’s faeries danced for me! May 3, 2020 for Emile Pinet's Spring Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/1/2020 4:54:00 AM
A wonderful entry for Emile's contest Andrea. Whimsical with a great ending! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2020 10:05:00 PM
All your Celtic images enrich this poem about leaving Ireland during the potato famine. History told in poetry so skillfully! Congratulations on your winning sonnet.
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Date: 5/28/2020 7:47:00 PM
Ah, here is your tribute to Irish faeries! Lovely ode to spring, my friend. Congratulations on your win in the spring contest! ~ John
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Date: 5/31/2020 1:49:00 PM
... and again congratulations for your win with Brian today!
Date: 5/9/2020 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This was a different, and yet most enjoyable entry to my contest, well done my friend.
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Date: 5/4/2020 3:55:00 PM
This is really quite nice. Why am I not surprised?
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Date: 5/4/2020 6:23:00 AM
This is such a gorgeous write; her imagery speaks to my heart. Being a farm-lover, and an Irish woman, and a fairy!
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Date: 5/4/2020 5:22:00 AM
Those magical fairies can do quite a number, I love your poetry, hope your keeping safe and healthy Andrea, xo
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Date: 5/4/2020 3:37:00 AM
A pioneer spirit resides in you, eh? I liked this story, Andrea ... it told a lot in just a few stanzas. "Beyond the blue of Atlantic's jagged hem" ... Your opening was my favorite part. Made me think of a big ole map with lots of illustrations. I would like to visit Ireland one day - my sister and her family visited it once and their stories of it make me jealous!
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Date: 5/3/2020 8:29:00 PM
Gosh, this is GOOD! Reading your enchanting tale, I caught the spirit, and the wave too! Thanks, Andrea! :) gw
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Date: 5/3/2020 5:01:00 PM
Lovely my friend. This would have been a good one for St. Patty's Day. Wonderful piece giving fair tribute to the Irish who also helped settle the New World. Bravo. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/3/2020 4:37:00 PM
Ireland truly is greenest gem--the nature, the people. Your poem is a tribute to the land. All the best, Andrea.
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