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A New Day

As hints of dawn's hues touch the sky night sheds its dark blanket and flies while tender light softens the way to waken the richness of day. Sweet scents mix with dew on the grass reviving the hillsides and paths trees brighten as birds sing their tunes sun's warm rays coax flowers to bloom. Written on 11/9/2018

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Date: 12/22/2018 12:33:00 PM
Hi Laura, A lover of nature is so present in you and evident in your beautifully chosen words for your poem. Well done Laura, A blessed Christmas to you and yours. Jennifer.
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Date: 12/22/2018 10:29:00 AM
This is beautiful with the exhibition of the zenith of poetic craft.I love the passion, expressions and beautiful lines... Merry christmas and a wonderful 2019.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/22/2018 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Funom! Your kind comments meant a lot to me! Merry Christmas to you! :)
Date: 12/16/2018 2:50:00 PM
Such nice and lovely piece Laura, fine penning!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/16/2018 11:00:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon!
Date: 12/12/2018 12:45:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery -- 'night sheds its dark blanket and flies.' Beautifully written, Laura. Best of the season, Gershon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/12/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 11/13/2018 10:33:00 PM
Sorry this beautiful poem didn't make the list Laura...but it was a short list. : )
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Date: 11/12/2018 4:16:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/12/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 11/10/2018 6:01:00 PM
Wonderfully done. i can't wait to think up a poem. i gotta hurry This contest is very popular.
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Date: 11/10/2018 11:51:00 AM
Lovely imagery and a great flow, Laura. This deserves to do well in the contest. Regards, John.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/10/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! I’m glad you liked my little poem!
Date: 11/10/2018 12:31:00 AM
The glory of dawn is depicted in your lovely poem Laura! Best wishes for a contest win. : ) xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/10/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Date: 11/9/2018 8:24:00 PM
Very well written. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Have a great weekend!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Date: 11/9/2018 5:40:00 PM
G'day Laura … nicely portrayed Laura with a fully positive scene to bring happiness - thank you Laura
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay! Glad you liked my poem! :)
Date: 11/9/2018 3:57:00 PM
i love this your poem,Laura, really softly words
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Dwijoko! :)
Date: 11/9/2018 3:52:00 PM
What gorgeous imagery, an absolute joy to read:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! So glad you liked this! :)
Date: 11/9/2018 1:11:00 PM
well done, Laura, the imagery is wonderful the smell is delicious. luck in the contest.................
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 3:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! :)