Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

A New Day

As hints of dawn's hues touch the sky
night sheds its dark blanket and flies
while tender light softens the way
to waken the richness of day.

Sweet scents mix with dew on the grass
reviving the hillsides and paths
trees brighten as birds sing their tunes
sun's warm rays coax flowers to bloom.



Written on 11/9/2018

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Jennifer Proxenos December 22, 2018 at 12:33 PM Hi Laura, A lover of nature is so present in you and evident in your beautifully chosen words for your poem. Well done Laura, A blessed Christmas to you and yours. Jennifer.

Funom Makama December 22, 2018 at 10:29 AM This is beautiful with the exhibition of the zenith of poetic craft.I love the passion, expressions and beautiful lines... Merry christmas and a wonderful 2019. Laura Leiser December 22, 2018 at 11:57 AM Thank you so much, Funom! Your kind comments meant a lot to me! Merry Christmas to you! :)

Gordon Mcconnell December 16, 2018 at 2:50 PM Such nice and lovely piece Laura, fine penning! Laura Leiser December 16, 2018 at 11:00 PM Thank you, Gordon!

Gershon Wolf December 12, 2018 at 12:45 PM Such wonderful imagery -- 'night sheds its dark blanket and flies.' Beautifully written, Laura. Best of the season, Gershon Laura Leiser December 12, 2018 at 6:52 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Connie Marcum Wong November 13, 2018 at 10:33 PM Sorry this beautiful poem didn't make the list Laura...but it was a short list. : )

Sara Kendrick November 12, 2018 at 4:16 PM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Laura Leiser November 12, 2018 at 8:31 PM Thank you, Sara! :)

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2018 at 6:01 PM Wonderfully done. i can't wait to think up a poem. i gotta hurry This contest is very popular.

John Michaels November 10, 2018 at 11:51 AM Lovely imagery and a great flow, Laura. This deserves to do well in the contest. Regards, John. Laura Leiser November 10, 2018 at 11:59 AM Thank you so much, John! I’m glad you liked my little poem!

Connie Marcum Wong November 10, 2018 at 12:31 AM The glory of dawn is depicted in your lovely poem Laura! Best wishes for a contest win. : ) xxoo Laura Leiser November 10, 2018 at 8:51 AM Thank you, Connie! :)

Mike Grant November 9, 2018 at 8:24 PM Very well written. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Have a great weekend! Laura Leiser November 9, 2018 at 8:59 PM Thank you, Mike! :)

Lindsay Laurie November 9, 2018 at 5:40 PM G'day Laura … nicely portrayed Laura with a fully positive scene to bring happiness - thank you Laura Laura Leiser November 9, 2018 at 7:35 PM Thank you, Lindsay! Glad you liked my poem! :)

Dwijoko Harianto November 9, 2018 at 3:57 PM i love this your poem,Laura, really softly words Laura Leiser November 9, 2018 at 4:52 PM Thank you, Dwijoko! :)

Jan Allison November 9, 2018 at 3:52 PM What gorgeous imagery, an absolute joy to read:-) Hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser November 9, 2018 at 4:50 PM Thank you, Jan! So glad you liked this! :)

Eve Roper November 9, 2018 at 1:11 PM well done, Laura, the imagery is wonderful the smell is delicious. luck in the contest................. Laura Leiser November 9, 2018 at 3:34 PM Thanks so much, Eve! :)