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A New Broomstick

A witch on a broomstick at night was veering to left and then right, she soared and she dipped, then over she flipped and swept up the Isle of Wight... Apologies to anyone who lives on the I of W : ) written 9th October for Tania's Halloween contest Syllables: 8, 8, 5, 5, 8

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Date: 10/20/2020 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jack!
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Date: 10/19/2020 4:27:00 PM
many congrats on your win Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2020 12:49:00 PM
teehee. Congratulations on the win Jack! Linda
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Date: 10/19/2020 12:29:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and fun limerick!
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Date: 10/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Fits in with October's Halloween month. Sara..Thanks for all the visits
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Date: 10/9/2020 11:38:00 PM
this is SO funny jack a perfectly penned poem:-) you need to add syllable count at the end of the poem xx
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Date: 10/9/2020 1:29:00 PM
Your witty sense of humour never lets you down, Jack:) Thank you for the laugh. Regards // paul
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