A New Broomstick

A witch on a broomstick at night
was veering to left and then right,
she soared and she dipped,
then over she flipped
and swept up the Isle of Wight...

Apologies to anyone who lives on the I of W : )

written 9th October for Tania's Halloween contest

Syllables: 8, 8, 5, 5, 8
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Koplin Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Jack!
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:27 PM
many congrats on your win Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:49 PM
teehee. Congratulations on the win Jack! Linda
Kitchin Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Jack, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and fun limerick!
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Fits in with October's Halloween month. Sara..Thanks for all the visits
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 11:38 PM
this is SO funny jack a perfectly penned poem:-) you need to add syllable count at the end of the poem xx
Callus Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Your witty sense of humour never lets you down, Jack:) Thank you for the laugh. Regards // paul
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