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A New Bird

Ghostly fog settles in the vale Charcoal clouds softly float The sun rises red 'pon this morn A sliver trees coat Fragile purple hides the blue sky The red fire ball gains height Exposes silhouettes dark And night has taken flight Apricot sun comes up higher Clouds turn to solid gray Soon the wisps will disappear And warm will be the day A new bird sings his love a song Close as the nearest Oak Soft background music surround sound Roosters, Doves, and frogs' croak A few minutes out on the porch Time to face a new day Nature's beauty now touches me How I want to just stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/19/2014 7:52:00 PM
So rich, so image giving and so damn wonderful writing!! Just have to grab that for my fav my friend. Bravo and bravo!
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Date: 5/16/2014 11:57:00 AM
Hi Sara, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem. It is highly appreciated. I read your poem New Bird. A great vision of each new day, a very nice write.
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Date: 5/14/2014 5:33:00 AM
vivid wonderful imagery as usual.. :) your words is as great as a painter master.. :D
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:40:00 PM
A fantastic write my friend . Heading straight to my fav.. Sent a few hundred messages to me the first read!!!!
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Date: 5/13/2014 6:16:00 PM
Awwwww Sara, I loved this ever so sweet poem. It brought me right there seeing and hearing it all. Very very beautiful. I love the way you capture nature its really something:-) Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. Thanks for your visits appreciate you. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:47:00 AM
Fantastic imagery, a new day and a new bird, sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:25:00 AM
aww beautiful scene. Have a beautiful day :)
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:12:00 AM
great imagery with an unusual title for it.
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Well done!
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