A New Bird

 Ghostly fog settles in the vale
Charcoal clouds softly float
The sun rises red 'pon this morn
A sliver  trees coat 

Fragile purple hides the blue sky
The red fire ball gains height
Exposes silhouettes dark
And night has taken flight

Apricot sun comes up higher
Clouds turn to solid gray
Soon the wisps will disappear
And warm will be the day

A new bird sings his love a song
Close as the nearest Oak
Soft background music surround sound
Roosters, Doves, and frogs' croak

A few minutes out on the porch
Time to face a new day
Nature's beauty now touches me
How I want to just stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:52 PM
So rich, so image giving and so damn wonderful writing!! Just have to grab that for my fav my friend. Bravo and bravo!
Johnson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Hi Sara, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem. It is highly appreciated. I read your poem New Bird. A great vision of each new day, a very nice write.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 5:33 AM
vivid wonderful imagery as usual.. :) your words is as great as a painter master.. :D
Lindley Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 8:40 PM
A fantastic write my friend . Heading straight to my fav.. Sent a few hundred messages to me the first read!!!!
Shiells Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Awwwww Sara, I loved this ever so sweet poem. It brought me right there seeing and hearing it all. Very very beautiful. I love the way you capture nature its really something:-) Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. Thanks for your visits appreciate you. Love and Peace, Deborah
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Fantastic imagery, a new day and a new bird, sara
Nance Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 8:25 AM
aww beautiful scene. Have a beautiful day :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 8:12 AM
great imagery with an unusual title for it.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:19 AM
Beautiful imagery! Well done!
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