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A New Beginning

I was a young mother 17 or younger She was a blessing 10 fingers...10 toes... A new beginning A child with perfection I never feared rejection But as years have gone by I just want to cry What has gone wrong It has been so long Only a phone call away No response today Mother and daughter Left lost and alone I would so treasure Those 10 fingers...10 toes... Another new beginning Would again make me whole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2024 11:23:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:10:00 PM
monique, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Monique. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:57:00 PM
a joy to read, nice one
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