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A New Beginning

Reborn here now without baggage No haunting beast or evil wraith I come, sans illicit luggage with a heightened belief in faith I'll not give in to temptation Reborn here now without baggage I am worthy of salvation Cleansed, in a new improved package Rebellion ousts right of passage I have learned my lesson quite well Reborn here now without baggage where in the past, from grace I fell Life offers a new beginning I've recovered from the damage No more anguish over sinning Reborn here now without baggage October 2, 2021 Dawn Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/22/2021 9:31:00 AM

Great write Jenna! "Life offers a new beginning"....very inspiring indeed! Blessings, Paulette

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/20/2021 9:42:00 AM

Jenna, congratulations on your win with this joyful psalm of thanksgiving for new life without "baggage" - a pilgrims story of ultimate triumph told in lyrical verses. Sending you blessings!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/21/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Sam.

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 10/18/2021 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations! What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece of writing! I can empathize with every word, as you penned such deep and soul-wrenching thoughts in the most brilliant way!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 7:22:00 PM

Hi Meghan. Thank you for your kind thoughts.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/18/2021 10:37:00 AM

Your poem flows so well from the beginning till the end dear Jenna... Loved the last stanza... Congratulations on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 10:58:00 AM

I’m so pleased you liked it, Anitha. Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/18/2021 9:43:00 AM

Love the contrast: Reborn here now without baggage/ where in the past, from grace I fell/Congratulations, Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 10:57:00 AM

Thanks for extolling a specific line, Kim!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/18/2021 6:46:00 AM

Brilliantly penned Quatern Jenna, congrats! I hope more people read this work and imbibe it’s sublime essence! Thank you for participating and look forward to your entry in the next Quietus contest coming up!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 8:20:00 AM

Thank you for honoring my Quatern with a placement in your contest, Seeker.

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/4/2021 7:34:00 AM

Your talent shines through once again. Great job and good luck with the contest!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 7:51:00 AM

Oh, thanks so much for your encouragement, Mark. The form looked difficult, but it worked with a sensible progression, so I'm happy with it.

Roger Harp

Date: 10/3/2021 1:59:00 PM

Beautiful piece!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2021 3:19:00 PM

Thank you, Roger.

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2021 7:18:00 AM

Jenna, wonderful, I like your poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2021 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so very much for liking these lines, Constance.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/3/2021 1:05:00 AM

I admit I have never written this type of poetry. So very well done, Loved it. :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2021 6:16:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. Give it a try, but first choose an easier word to rhyme with the last word of the first line. The form is based on that making sense in all 4 verses.