Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Dodoitsu

A New Beginning

Bright turmeric foliage
                                     Sign of transition in life
                                     Lambent lush turns up after
                                     The hibernation.



                                    Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu 
                                    Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                    Date: 01/10/2020 
                                    Placed : 2nd

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jan Allison October 6, 2020 at 3:20 PM i especially love the opening line Patri, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Patri Venkata Ramana October 7, 2020 at 8:22 AM Thanks for the compliments.

Constance La France October 5, 2020 at 7:39 AM Patri, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance Patri Venkata Ramana October 7, 2020 at 8:21 AM Thanks for the compliments.

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 1:13 PM Lovely Patri. Turmeric color - very beautiful. Congratulations! Linda Patri Venkata Ramana October 7, 2020 at 8:21 AM Thanks for the compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2020 at 11:44 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Patri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Patri Venkata Ramana October 7, 2020 at 8:20 AM Thanks for the compliments.