A Neighborhood Child

One Christmas eve    my ceiling hung
With thready webs    a glow behind
Cast lace patterns on my bed

That Yule    eight reindeer ran the covers
Then through every midnight room
I cried to mother    father    brother

All of whom had shed    by dream
Their task of season’s rush and bother
Free    but lost to my entreat

“Can’t you see them paw    prance?
Oh    mother    how they rear and point
At Santa – that jolly     Christmas    ghost”

All filmy things    once designated
Then    not real    evaporated
And I sat straight up in bed

Rubbed the cobwebs from my eyes
Memory of tinsel    candy
Presents in my drowsy head

Awake to silence    angel hair
Little men in forest dress
Imaginary pixies on the stair

And then    remembering the tree
(all hazy else    it seems    had been a dream)
The tree that by our fireplace rose

In thought it glowed above the dreamy web
Those blue    green    red    silver lights    
Had formed quaint phantoms on my bed

I’m up    on tiptoe    and carefully
Am sneaking toward the living room
(Inky blackness    don’t you see)

Don’t you see the little man
Dressed in Santa suit   belt     and boots
Spreading presents neath the tree

Now truth be known    so sorry am I to say
‘Little boy blue’ is yet in bed
Those phantom figures swimming his head

And late that eve    ceiling bright
With visions of the coming day
The wisest Angel of the night

Makes visit    singing    of the play
A song of filial brotherhood
With child invests the neighborhood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/25/2009 11:45:00 AM
Oh, I just read your comment to my other poem. YEs, our poems are somewhat similar, about little kids on Christmas Eve!
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Date: 12/25/2009 11:43:00 AM
This had a dreamy nostalgic quality to it, DAve. Nice little read! Thanks for commenting on my poems, I have lots of humorous ones in store for you (just dont' dare to post all my stuff at once). Hope to see your funny stuff too in the future! andrea
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Date: 12/18/2009 12:30:00 AM
Especially like the first triplet,an inner poem Daver.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words.
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Date: 12/15/2009 3:54:00 AM
It would appear to me you were visted by Mr. Poe - HO! hO! HO! lol! You never cease to amaze and delight, dear Daver. Love,Lainie
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Date: 12/12/2009 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful, daver. Your poetry continues to delight. Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:23:00 PM
Me thinks you were a captivating child with a huge imagination....me thinks that the little boy blue is you...and you still have that wonderful captivating imagination... Please never lose it...and please never "grow up"! Loved this poem! :) Luv, Carrie
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:11:00 PM
I like your comments..they SAY something..something other than "congrad's" you're a meaningful man! Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:09:00 PM
Very nice memories shared in the fun and well written poem. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:08:00 PM
what a neat poem Dave-r..it gets better as you read it again. Mery Chrstman you...Bg
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:36:00 PM
ahh yes --christmas dreams, merry christmas lil boy blue. -Robert
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