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A Naughty Twist To An Old Rhyme

The Build UP One two…I want you Three four...Kiss me more Five six…tasty licks Seven eight…I can’t wait Nine ten…Come again! The Cool Down? ;) Ten, nine…that was fine Eight, seven…still in heaven Six, five….I feel alive Four, three…more for me Two, one…I’m undone! Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 4/22/2013 11:34:00 AM
Ha ha ha!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 9:58:00 PM
;) :) ;)
Date: 4/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
Eileen!...calm down now...haha.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:40:00 AM
;) Ok....will try! Life is just so tough for passionate people! Grrrrrrrrr!
Date: 4/21/2013 9:49:00 PM
You never fail to amaze me!!!!! Now this tune is stuck in my head!!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:41:00 AM
Hee Hee! Well..memorize it! It might get you more attention than the other one! ;)
Date: 4/21/2013 3:05:00 PM
I love this Auntie, great twist, and it eases my anxiety for one I'll soon be posting lol. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:42:00 AM
RICHARD!!!! You gone and done something I won't approve???? Been checking since....hurry up!
Date: 4/21/2013 8:49:00 AM
Come again? You naughty person, you... LOL! I'll never think of this rhyme the same way again...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:43:00 AM
HA HA HA HA HA! Somehow couldn't work around the BIG FAT HEN! ;) I'm naughty, but nice! ;)
Date: 4/21/2013 8:09:00 AM
Cute!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/22/2013 7:40:00 AM
and sweet? ;)

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