Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

A Naughty Twist To An Old Rhyme

The Build UP

One two…I want you
Three four...Kiss me more
Five six…tasty licks
Seven eight…I can’t wait
Nine ten…Come again!

The Cool Down? ;)

Ten, nine…that was fine
Eight, seven…still in heaven
Six, five….I feel alive
Four, three…more for me
Two, one…I’m undone!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Sima Mittal April 22, 2013 at 11:34 AM Ha ha ha! Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 9:58 PM ;) :) ;)

Painted Hunter April 22, 2013 at 7:39 AM Eileen!...calm down now...haha. Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:40 AM ;) Ok....will try! Life is just so tough for passionate people! Grrrrrrrrr!

Donna Jones April 21, 2013 at 9:49 PM You never fail to amaze me!!!!! Now this tune is stuck in my head!!!! Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:41 AM Hee Hee! Well..memorize it! It might get you more attention than the other one! ;)

Richard D Seal April 21, 2013 at 3:05 PM I love this Auntie, great twist, and it eases my anxiety for one I'll soon be posting lol. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:42 AM RICHARD!!!! You gone and done something I won't approve???? Been checking since....hurry up!

Timothy Hicks April 21, 2013 at 8:49 AM Come again? You naughty person, you... LOL! I'll never think of this rhyme the same way again... Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:43 AM HA HA HA HA HA! Somehow couldn't work around the BIG FAT HEN! ;) I'm naughty, but nice! ;)

Richard Lamoureux April 21, 2013 at 8:09 AM Cute! Eileen Manassian April 22, 2013 at 7:40 AM and sweet? ;)