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Picture Prompt Contest by Margarita Lillico - 8/7/24

A Nasty Deed


With his friends, Ben was playing hide and seek
They said, "Put your head in the pool, don't peek"
They'd done a nasty deed
In the water they'd peed
Then, spent the next week calling Ben a freak
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Allison Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 3:18 PM
oh yeuk lol - creased me up - Lin please may I nick the idea and so a poem for next book? hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 3:48 PM
aww thanks Lin you are so kind my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Absolutely! Of course you may.
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 1:46 PM
lol Gross but funny. Good luck in the contest!
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 2:39 PM
"Gross but funny" ~ perfect comment, Karen. Thanks!
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Lol yuck, makes you wonder how many can't be bothered to get out of a swimming pool. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 2:39 PM
Many, I'm sure and not just children! Thanks, Tom.
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