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Picture Prompt Contest by Margarita Lillico - 8/7/24

With his friends, Ben was playing hide and seek They said, "Put your head in the pool, don't peek" They'd done a nasty deed In the water they'd peed Then, spent the next week calling Ben a freak

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Date: 8/7/2024 3:18:00 PM
oh yeuk lol - creased me up - Lin please may I nick the idea and so a poem for next book? hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2024 3:48:00 PM
aww thanks Lin you are so kind my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 3:30:00 PM
Absolutely! Of course you may.
Date: 8/7/2024 1:46:00 PM
lol Gross but funny. Good luck in the contest!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2024 2:39:00 PM
"Gross but funny" ~ perfect comment, Karen. Thanks!
Date: 8/7/2024 12:58:00 PM
Lol yuck, makes you wonder how many can't be bothered to get out of a swimming pool. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2024 2:39:00 PM
Many, I'm sure and not just children! Thanks, Tom.

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