A Musing

A pebble dropped into a pool Reveals ripples poets find cool But when I look Into a brook It reveals an Halloween ghoul

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2020 12:22:00 PM

Oh, my, a different type of limerick. Well done, Rico. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2020 10:44:00 AM

OH OH. Good one. I like the Krampus remark below.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/14/2020 6:58:00 PM

Krampus is the dark side of Santa - thanks, Andrea!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/14/2020 11:07:00 AM

My muse must have been Krampus inspired? Aloha! Rico

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2020 10:37:00 AM

Oooh, dark poem, Rico. I try not to look in the mirror and will avoid brooks now too! Excellent write! Hugs, Carolyn

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/14/2020 11:12:00 AM

Narcissus got the pool instead of a Krampus brook, but most people can not look in a mirror more than a few minutes without seeing their "evil" side.....Aloha! Rico

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/13/2020 7:29:00 PM

G’day Rico … are you putting your movie star looks down Rico - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/14/2020 11:13:00 AM

Movie star looks are mostly cosmetic and quickly deteriorate in a brook .....Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/13/2020 4:43:00 PM

Or maybe Krampus (tis the season!)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/14/2020 11:05:00 AM

Score a winner for you! Aloha! Rico

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2020 10:15:00 AM

Lol!Rico, I laughed out loud with this one! I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/14/2020 11:06:00 AM

Your comments would brighten anyone's day! Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico